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  1. ConcubusBunny

    Beta-reading exchange?

    I love this idea, I tried doing something like that in the forum but it never caught traction.
  2. ConcubusBunny

    Why do you write?

    Cause it's my passion to create fin stories that tell diverse stories about people, places, cultures and scenes that I've thought up it brings me unimaginable joy to hear that people actually enjoyed my stories, I don't really care about the numbers I get or how much I make if people like what I...
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    Character death

    Have a character death be important for character growth of characters in relationships to them, character growth for mc, story wise to show the severity of an enemy, to show a deep vulnerable side to a character that they won't show other wise. In my opinion a character death should never be...
  4. ConcubusBunny

    Writing Kitty's Current Idea... Needs fleshing out.

    I didn't include the bystanders because in the grand scheme of things they don't matter too much story wise especially to a character with depression, peeps put too much on the bystanders but in truth no one cares about some random joes but not to say you should pretend that they don't exist...
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    Writing List of worst things consistently generalized in repetitive forms throughout stories of CN, JP, KR, and etc.

    For me it'd be the energetic character being character relief or butt of all jokes which is never funny The heroes crush not doing jack shit but saying the support them always peeved me and somehow always getting in trouble and doesn't know how to shut their trap. The thievery or bandit being...
  6. ConcubusBunny

    How much do you like smut?

    Yes but the problem is most people like the emotions behind like with people in a relationship, but smut for smuts sake isn't really interesting to read not to say people who do this as non romantics is any less interesting it's more of make it enjoyable for all parties emotionally and less of...
  7. ConcubusBunny

    Early Romance and Late Romance?

    I'd go for early romance cause it feels more like they have chemistry and feelings early on in the romance and the audience will get to experience the relationship early on which I love to read. The late romance sorta feel like something demiromantics mc story will have or for writers aren't...
  8. ConcubusBunny

    Writing [Tutorial] When & How to Smut

    Thank you for responding to my post this really helped me out with making smut scenes although I want to take a bit smut from here and there to be a hardcore/romantic fetishy story with sexual partners, I also want to make smut scenes that everyone can enjoy and be satisfied with so I have some...
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    Writing Kitty's Current Idea... Needs fleshing out.

    Hm alright I'll give my grim ending the thing is that I don't know how awful it will be but if you find joy in it that'll be great. So the mc found a place to belong with her new friends still hating the Kong at this point when to other demon lord's hear of the MC's demon king's plans and...
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    Writing Kitty's Current Idea... Needs fleshing out.

    Thank you Thank you, glad my voice was heard although these weren't even my grim ending these were the "happiest" endings that I could think in a realistic setting due to the info given but I didn't go too dark cause you didn't seem to be fund of that if I did they'll be way more death on both...
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    Writing Kitty's Current Idea... Needs fleshing out.

    The people before me had so many great idea and I might be shouting into the void but I still wanna say something, the following words? I have to say may contradict with your initial story if so maybe take parts of it with you or make a what if chapter set if you want. Route 1 the lying demon...
  12. ConcubusBunny

    I need an activity in my story

    That'd be great idea I've never been to one so some info will be great
  13. ConcubusBunny

    I need an activity in my story

    Okay my characters Hiyou: Psychopathic realist cut off from their emotions and hyper think things making mistakes cause they don't know how people work. Kiopra: Sweet, relaxed, care giver insecure about their power and incapability. Ghyuoui: energetic clown scared of failure cares little for...
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    I need an activity in my story

    They are hold up in a rental home for vacation in a scifi fantasy world on break from their 8 month long work trying to relax from their work before going at it again for who knows how long. They are eight characters in total all extremely horny except for the ace and are all pretty chaotic...
  15. ConcubusBunny

    I need an activity in my story

    Thanks but that's some teen titans go or regular show level of stupidity, I'm for adult anime adventure comedy
  16. ConcubusBunny

    I need an activity in my story

    So I'm kinda in a rut guys I'm in the middle of a resting period before the second wave of the beginning plot of my story but I need a bunch of activities for my group of miscreants to do while I'm waiting for the plot to progress. This part is somewhat important to their characterization and...
  17. ConcubusBunny

    Smut writers when is the best time to smut??

    I am a new writer and I'd like to know how some smut writers write their smut to be honest I thought it'd be good to put it out there to do and get feed back on how smutty our smut should be also to get feedback on places to put smut where it shouldn't even belong to obstruct the actual plot, I...
  18. ConcubusBunny

    Selfless pluuugggg! Right here!

    Alrighty time for the review I thought a lot about this so here's the disclaimer for anyone who reads this, these are simply my thoughts and not law, these are just things that I like and found flaws in, please take with a grain of salt. First of all the good and honestly well thought out parts...
  19. ConcubusBunny

    To smut, or not to smut?

    You could try smutting earlier if you planned to go wild any way, not something crazy just a simple sex scene between lovers should do just fine to satisfy their list full cravings.
  20. ConcubusBunny

    Selfless pluuugggg! Right here!

    Oh I like this I've only seen a poly series once before so this could be nice also how did put that pronoun stuff under you name You could try explaining the chapter like try explaining the situation the mc might face but don't put too much detail like, the mc took on a quest with their party...
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