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  1. ConcubusBunny

    content short chapter or filler long chapters, which one ?

    I'd say a hybrid but paced properly cause nothing ruins a story more than not having enough content or having too much but I forget nearly everything two minutes later so try putting the fluff with the content but in places that makes sense and not too much that it bores the readers
  2. ConcubusBunny

    Character pov + omniscient pov hybrid for multiple mc's

    Hello my lovely guys, gals and enby pals I want to your insight on something, I wanted to creat a multiple mc story but lack of interesting stories or advice has helped and no trying to follow a story with a huge cast of characters hasn't helped me in this regard either, cause it just didn't...
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    Is making an intersex character fetish fuel

    Hello my lovely guys, gals and enby pals I just wanna know is making an intersex character fetish fuel? What's your opinion on this? How will you perceive my characters? I had this on my mind for a long ass time and needed to hear someone else's opinion, I mean I'm still going ahead with it but...
  4. ConcubusBunny

    Well I've had this in my mind for a while and now you will too

    Su Supplement of porn to add extra flavor to my smut, I'd never be so daring to actually make scat porn my plot What's nh? Whoa there buddy, I ain't into porn that causes pain, I guess I could do more bdsm scenes I'd never go the route of inflicting pain on characters during sex scenes
  5. ConcubusBunny

    Well I've had this in my mind for a while and now you will too

    Shit play fetish used in hentai setting when you want dig deep into true degeneracy.
  6. ConcubusBunny

    Well I've had this in my mind for a while and now you will too

    It's far too late for that, it's already part of my characters characterization
  7. ConcubusBunny

    i need help regarding this topic

    To be honest I just bullshit my way through all my info of names of item and stuff picking the best ones that suit the tone that I'm going for or search for some via fandom wiki, but mostly it's just "random bullshit go!" For me.
  8. ConcubusBunny

    Well I've had this in my mind for a while and now you will too

    So guys, gals and enby pals, I've had a little cursed thought bubble in my head that I need your input on it .... SCAT! You probably need more information to make Sense of the this, well while indulging in some good old nsfl I thought "what if I added consentual scat or water sport...
  9. ConcubusBunny

    Post Your Synopsis & Get Feedback

    I don't know if anyone will respond to this bit oh well also this story isn't currently on scribblehub still trying to fine tune it. Title: Din world Synopsis: An LGBT furry story of a group of individuals in a sci-fi fantasy world of magic and kingdoms trying to live on this unforgiving world...
  10. ConcubusBunny

    Do you think "standard" isekais are over?

    Welcome to life where everything popular gets a hundred clones trying to copy that one geniuses way of doing things in hopes of becoming someone only for people to get bored with it and wanting something more cause what was once special or different became commonplace and watch fade into...
  11. ConcubusBunny

    How do you refrain from writing overly smart MC’s?

    Easy I just write myself. Okay but in all seriousness writing an overly smart mc in a story or setting that doesn't push them to their limits and challenge them constantly will get pretty boring real quick, caused since they are so smart no one really proves a challenge and all problems get...
  12. ConcubusBunny

    Writing [Tutorial] When & How to Smut

    This comes off majorly narcissistic, pandering is never good no matter what kinda book you're writing it'll damage your creative freedom leaving you with plot holes and undesirable story outcomes. The sex scenes may be what draw people in but won't keep them there only very few lucky authors can...
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    Writing [Tutorial] How to Make THE END

    Thanks for the encouragement but the my cast of multiple Mac's is more than a five man band. Also do you have any advice on how to diversify and flesh a multiple MC story any advice would be great
  14. ConcubusBunny

    Writing [Tutorial] How to Make THE END

    Is it weird that I don't have an ending to be honest the main plot of my story are the characters so the end will be them getting their shit together and working as a unit I think that's a good ending for my story. Also that game thrones part, damn that's some analogy, I never thought someone...
  15. ConcubusBunny

    Plot point reached earlier than expected

    I'd end it there especially if the fluff I have planned adds nothing to the story and just distancts the readers from the plot.
  16. ConcubusBunny

    Writing I need a better synopsis

    I do have a main character there's just a lot of them and not one of them is more or less important than the others they all serve a purpose, but thanks anyways
  17. ConcubusBunny

    Writing Action Scenes (Help me pls)

    My advice is watch anime with action scenes and pause every so often and plot out those action scenes when you are done turn off the anime and read it to yourself or post it on the forum plus link to the vid to get people to verify and critique your work do this enough times and you should get...
  18. ConcubusBunny

    Writing I need a better synopsis

    The plot centers around a group of people working together to preserve the structure of their dimension at any means necessary the story like I said above takes place with them ensuring that the would be plots of other books happens. I got the idea wondering what would happen if someone...
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    Writing I need a better synopsis

    Above is is my current web novel that I'm writing (not posted yet) that needs a better synopsis so I came here in hopes of getting some advice on how to make it better. I guess I should add some extra details though to get people to have a better understanding with what I'm trying to make. The...
  20. ConcubusBunny

    How do girls feel about Harems for guys?

    Re What you are describing is a polyamoros relationship and no, no would to have a poly relationship with multiple romantic partners there needs to be consent with everyone involved so the mc needs to discuss this with the first partner to see if they are okay with their romantic choice
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