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    1st chapter bullet points

    Making the first chapter and made bullet points to start from there, and lead into the full text want to get opinions on how it looks so far. Introduction He starts in a dream climbing a hill to see.. something he is chasing someone who calls his name and tries to encourage him, he is...
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    3rd story has been chosen!

    The 3rd story has been chosen! Thank you, everyone, for all the help with picking which one to start. I will work on the other stories as well on a later date. I will start working on the very first chapter and try to post it later this week! I hope I can get some more feedback then as well. ?‍♂️
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    3rd story has been chosen!

    I have built them all into their own separate world build one is a pure fantasy word then it’s 2 mmo Hmm I will try it out and see how it goes thank you! Thank you! I didn’t put too much detail into the world because I didn’t want to give everything away because if I shared more it out it...
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    3rd story has been chosen!

    For the third story he would only have one life after his possession before that though yes it would be video game revives
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    Thank you! I will recreate that post tomorrow and I hope you enjoyed reading my fantastical ideas

    Thank you! I will recreate that post tomorrow and I hope you enjoyed reading my fantastical ideas
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    I see where should I post it then? I hardly ever use the forum?‍??

    I see where should I post it then? I hardly ever use the forum?‍??
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    Need feedback only on this chapter 1

    Wow that is some boxing combo read it love it, and completely agree with the pacing issue
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    3rd story has been chosen!

    Hi I am an avid reader of scribble-hub and want to write a story I have 3 in mind with stage 1 progression in all of them or general outline so to say but don’t know which one to start and was hoping to get some help on what would be more interesting to you guys? Story 1 sword and magic No...
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    Need feedback only on this chapter 1

    Hi I saw you post and gave it a read. I would give grammar 6/10 storyline 9/10 unique start 9/10 Sentence flow 4/10 overall 6.5/10 (This is my personal opinion and am not trying to be rude to your hard work in anyway) Thoughts: The hook was interesting of him read a generic story, the...
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    I will win!!!
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    Anyone got any stories that aren't isekai or fan related

    Well I have a maybe good idea of a story in my head it’s not about beginning weak it’s more about past actions and big end game fights and the morality on the Main character and his thoughts as well cool fights that’s all I got off the top of my head anyone have clues I could go to iron out the...
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    ?[CHALLENGE]? Finish the Sentence in EXACTLY 20 Words! Unleash Your Creativity

    A mysterious stranger entered the room and Looked into the room void of light and slipped on poop and face planted right into a mug of poop.
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    Apparently some American schools are attempting to ban manga

    I also remember reading a story in middle school that I found weird that was in the school library it was a manga and I forgot the name but it was the story about the boy who was lazy about painting a fence and convincing other kids to do it for him and giving him stuff. Near the end of the...
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    Great opening lines on SH?

    “Fuck this was a bad day” “Hmm I see red” “*barf/blargh drip drop that was nast-“ Personal opinion
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    Helpp i needa tip or knowledgee

    You can set up the chapters and split them in two so it looks like it just ends when everything is there in the next chapter that way you have more to flex and create on how things progress as well add more detail, I think that might help don’t know really not a writer
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    Recommendations mc aims for the greater good

    I would also like something similar I used to find something interesting every time I get on SH now my days are full of boredom and work. I’m not a writer but I think a cool story could be about how the main protagonist goes cryptic trying to find a goal in his life and he keeps asking others...
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    What is your favorite type of villain, and why?

    I always try to find villains and want to find a villain to where he doesn’t exist you don’t know who or what he is but he acts like a gentleman in front of but that makes it so much more dangerous. You try to search for him he will show up right behind you he wears a mask with smiles for eyes...
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