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  1. Kalliel

    Feedback, Feedback, Feedb... Cough! Hey floks, Wanna help me out? Pretty Please

    If you want to reference my works (God knows why they're quite bad), please do read the recent chapters instead of the first ones. I wrote the first ones when I just started writing, so they are very clunky. And about the tenses. You essentially have two options: present tense or past tense...
  2. Kalliel

    Feedback, Feedback, Feedb... Cough! Hey floks, Wanna help me out? Pretty Please

    Roger that. Before anything, though, I just want to say that I only read the first chapter. Firstly, your synopsis is quite literally a nothing burger. I didn't get anything after reading it. Okay, maybe the cultivation part... except that one is already told by the tags. Now, to be fair, I...
  3. Kalliel

    It's over 1000!

    Pog.
  4. Kalliel

    Sex image into the sex scenes?

    Uh... I have no recollection of that particular information. :blob_hide:
  5. Kalliel

    Sex image into the sex scenes?

    Bro what.
  6. Kalliel

    SHF High-school Fanfic

    I gave up.
  7. Kalliel

    What To Do With Too Many Oranges? ?

    You throw like, two or three oranges into a stocking or something, then you would have a functional murder weapon. Make around ten of those and distribute them to other citizens.
  8. Kalliel

    Rate my essay

    Feel like the grammar could be polished more. Also, the tone at the end of the third passage feels a bit unprofessional, for me, at least. Oh, and about the content itself. I would rather want you to give me examples of what are the extreme sports in the beginning.
  9. Kalliel

    Rejected from Royal Road for a "sexual cover," now posting on Scribble Hub

    Yeah, no, my Local Elf novel was initially declined because of that exact same reason. Sexual cover. So what did I do? I swapped that cover for a lewder one, and somehow it went through. Still up till this day. It's truly a gacha of all time.
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    SHF High-school Fanfic

    Pretty normal, I'd say.
  11. Kalliel

    As an author do you believe in the same ideals as your Mac?

    I'm not really a fan of Apple products, so.
  12. Kalliel

    Rest days (Workout question)

    You don't rest, you ain't doing it right. Just know that.
  13. Kalliel

    Serious advice needed on pursuing writing [All suggestions are welcomed]

    1. Yes, set a time for it. It doesn't need to be absolute, like from this hour to this hour, but set a deadline for it. That's what I do. 2. Absolutely. If you know what to write, you can get well above that. 3. If you want to be safe, look for something else just in case.
  14. Kalliel

    I have a question for people who know about psychology/psychiatry.

    That's what I like to hear. Ghosts are just losers who can't move on from death. As for your main question, I can't answer since I don't have the knowledge.
  15. Kalliel

    Pinned chapters

    Might just be a me problem, but I never check the glossary for anything I read. Potential spoiler. But I do admit, that might not be the same for other people. And I want the pinned chapters to be on top of the normal ones like Novelpia has, specifically, as it provides way more visibility.
  16. Kalliel

    Pinned chapters

    Having a feature where authors can pin certain chapters on top of regular ones would be nice for me. For example, I can pin a compilation of illustrations in my story, or a 'readme' kind of chapter as well. This way, I can attract the attention of the readers to the pinned chapters if I need to...
  17. Kalliel

    Why do YOU upload at the times you choose?

    I just randomly decided on a time, and now I find myself obligated to upload at that exact moment. It's weird.
  18. Kalliel

    I need to know if I am writing this scene well or not.

    Eminem is that you? Jokes aside, you really shouldn't make a paragraph like this. It will break immersion more than splitting the paragraph into two or three. People's eyes have limits, they won't be happy reading that. And I'm not sure if I like seeing that much babbling in the first place...
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