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I didn't know so many sites pirated my stories prior to this, so thanks.

I know Tempokai basically slaughtered your story and gave it a funeral and a requiem already, but I just want to add: The title doesn't mean anything. That's bad if you want to grab anyone's attention. Also, right from your synopsis, the tenses aren't matching.

Good job.

I don't plan my stories. Immunity +1

Hell yeah. I'd see my grandpa again.

The thing is, it's often easier to make a story feel more 'good' if the protagonist is winning, especially against stronger opponents, and it's easier to make the protagonist win once you add in the protagonist buffs of bloodline and fate. Also, you're looking at the wrong genre. Shounen mangas...

Didn't know you could get into trending with just 35k views, but okay.

If you do that, try not to fall into the habit of writing for the sake of writing, only trying to increase the word count instead of progressing the story or adding meaningful details.

I wonder when it will reach a point where these out-of-touch companies lose enough money that they stop hiring DEI consultants. People, in general, are too busy to care about certain ideologies being pushed in a video game when often they have nothing to do with the game itself. Or they'll still...

I won't, but Domino's will.

Whether a story is a 'failure' or not is subjective. Some already consider having a story to be a success. With that said, don't think so badly of your story. Now, I think I have looked at your rat story once or twice before, and I can find the same issues that one has on this one as well. I...

It is definitely a cultural matter. Asia is much more conservative in general, so I think you're right about that. And I can understand why people in the West have mental problems more often, considering the state of politics there, especially in the US. Holy hell, people there are so divided.

I honestly have no idea about this stuff, but after consuming Western content for a few years, I've noticed an unusual number of people just casually mentioning they have a therapist, and everybody says nothing about it. Here in Asia, practically no one gets a therapist unless there's a serious...

I've seen quite a concerning number of people who have a therapist in the first place. Is it really common?

Just show them that you can tell.

I often fall asleep before I go to sleep.

I didn't know English until five years ago, and the same goes for Western culture, so it's only obvious. 19 is old, though.

I think you need to work on your linguistic skills before that. Try focus on clarity.

Just randomly stumbled upon this masterpiece earlier. How did I not know of such a marvel until now? I used to listen to the usual rap all the time, but this... this is something else. Something about the sheer intensity and swagness with which he spits about his daily stuff really gets me...

I remember seeing your novel at 450-something chapters when I first got to the site, and you post daily, too. Incredible job, man. Keep it up!