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  1. APieceOfRock

    Should Dragons have rights?

    I usually don't care about any of this but you're a piece of shit for denying climate change and carbon emission being bad. I lived my childhood in Vietnam and let me tell you, the floods are getting worse every year. The sea is also eating into the land. While it may not be as bad as media...
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    Should Dragons have rights?

    Don't listen to the Mothpire!
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    Should Dragons have rights?

    May the Blood Star bless you
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    Should Dragons have rights?

    What is a God to a JRPG player who hoards healing items?
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    Should Dragons have rights?

    I am the Lord of all that is Golden.
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    Non English Writers Beware

    The way the detector works is that it flags sections of the writing without caring for context (I think). So the sections with those words won't get flagged. But others will,.
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    What Do You Think About These Stories?

    still, I'm betting they aren't killing people on a daily basis before the got in prison. Going to war would break anyone—even murderers
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    What Do You Think About These Stories?

    And they are now mercenaries. If criminals can be pardoned and not be legally classified as criminals anymore, why shouldn't they be mercenaries now?
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    Non English Writers Beware

    I feel you. There's this one guy in my reviews that says my story is written by AI just because I dropped an Arc I knew was going to be unenjoyable for everyone. It feels like a gut punch, man.
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    What Do You Think About These Stories?

    I guess every military are criminals now. Oops. The only really difference between them that one is private, and the other is also private but they have good PR.
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    What Do You Think About These Stories?

    Hitler? You mean that one Austrian artist everyone's been talking about for years? Idk what's up with that guy
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    What Do You Think About These Stories?

    That's actually an interesting topic to explore. How war and hard times and twist people to such a degree. I think Wagner's mercenaries HAD to do it multiple times, and to detached themselves from reality, they make it a twisted fun. I can't speak from personal experience but even a child with a...
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    What Do You Think About These Stories?

    1 - because you asked. 2 - okay I conceded on that point. I only really skimmed through the guy's comment
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    What Do You Think About These Stories?

    1 - "Justify taking action" means WHY the guy did it. Not literally justifying his action. So I'm assuming Hitler wanted to push an agenda to achieve his delusions. If not, literally outing a race of people as demons can unify even the most fractured of countries. 2 - People can be monsters...
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    What one spell would you make if you're a wizard in a world with a soft magic system?

    I guess that weird part where you don't feel anything on your elbow is going to finally be useful.
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    What one spell would you make if you're a wizard in a world with a soft magic system?

    Methinks metal pipes are the best instrument you;re torturing the cast. Stop "Remember two weeks ago when you borrowed money from me? Yeah, I want it back now." :blob_upset: Idk how it would be useful but cool spell "It's over, villain. I AM THE OBAMA PRISM NOW!" "It's over, Johnny. You're...
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    What one spell would you make if you're a wizard in a world with a soft magic system?

    Just curious to see what everyone would make (totally not stealing spell ideas) My personal spell:
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    Writing How do you guys transition from describing a fight, to showing a conversation between different characters?

    I think that would kill the pace of the fight entirely (see any DragonBall Fight or Record of Ragnarok). But you do you, I guess. Imagine you're watching an intense fight and the camera just cuts to spectators bulging their eyes out at every little move instead of actually showing us what the...
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    What is the appeal of watching suicide?

    I guess they find solace in the fact that they haven't been pushed to that. A superiority complex, honestly.
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    Writing How do you guys tell your readers your characters' power level?

    " I closed my eyes in concentration. As if the decades of experience was etched in Ellen’s soul when I merged with her, my body moved. One single slash cut through air like a hot knife through butter. There was no target. Yet, the might of the slash forced even the rain and thunder outside to...
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