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I went old school and bought a cork notice board. hung it on my wall next to my desk and put notes on it like a detective solving a case. lmao it is effective, if not outdated. *edit* got a map I drew, characters lists, and money counts. who dies or lives is marked and important chapter notes...

drug addicted angel/ball of light, rebels against reality.

the yellow flowers smell like piss thing was great. I get it now and fair enough. :ROFLMAO:

how about a process like, describe move one time - name move- use name to reference move?

fair enough, I simply meant for gun play. you could always set up a simple caveat that distinguishes certain weapon types apart other than ammo or weapon type. it could be something like the person using it themselves with a martial art combination like in Equilibrium.

you need to check out Saga of Tanya the Evil. they do a similar concept, and it'd probably help you with your idea

samurai jack

Yeah, I meant the thank you note, that's all. People DM'd me their thoughts. So, I was just letting anyone else here know I got enough feedback, and it was appreciated. As for the link not being clear I'm not sure I understand, if you'd elaborate it'd appreciate it.

Sorry man, did I confuse you?

Right on

From all the messages I've received, I most likely have my answer. Thanks guys!

First off, I'm not looking for reviews or any real effort here. This story is one that I pitched a few days ago, and it was rejected outright. So, naturally I ran with it making a summary, title, and two chapters. I'm just looking to get some feedback on what kind of dark comedy people are...

Like the title asks; Philosophy VS mythology, which intrigues you more in a story? Perhaps a combination of the two? It's a simple question that I find myself thinking about a lot in fantasy writing. My personal preference seems to lean 70-30 in favor of philosophy. To me it feels like mythology...

The first book that impacted me was, Fallen Angels (7thgrade) The best book overall early on, The Count Of Monte Cristo (9th grade) The best fiction I've enjoyed, Enders Game (10th grade)