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Well, I've read chapter 1 (prologue?). I wanted to ask, what kind of POV did you use in chapter 1? And why did you choose that POV?

Rewatch Your Lie in April

I'm happy for you, dude. But I hope it's not a compliment like this: I'd much rather get a short, honest comment like this:

There are differences between in-person (real-world) social interactions and online interactions, which can lead to criticism being interpreted differently. Furthermore, the author's age also determines how criticism will be responded to. Teenagers, for example, are in a phase of identity...

As I suspected, you're still too young for honest, constructive, and blunt feedback. Initially, I wanted to offer such feedback. But I backed off after seeing your age profile, which was too young. I know that kind of feedback can backfire. Young authors need more growth. Too harsh criticism...

@lizzyrose Listen to his/her @GhoulishTales advice. If you consistently apply at least 70% of his/her advice to your writing, your writing will approach the pro-level of a self-publishing.

Hmm... which do you prefer: her highness or her majesty?

Short questions: Why did you choose the mature genre? How relevant is the mature genre to your story?

Honestly, dude. In terms of writing style, I prefer your old prologue. The old prologue had a solid narrative. The scenes were very easy to visualize. The characters felt alive in their world. And there was almost no narrator voice leakage (except for a minor error in character name...

Handle Sensitive Content of Mother's Childbirth As the title above, I want to narrate the scene meaningfully, emotionally, and not exploitatively. I want to respect a mother's struggle. I already have a reference but I'm not sure how to implement it precisely. What do you think? I'd love to...

The emotional impact of fiction is considered successful if it meets the expectations of its genre. Comedy fiction makes you laugh. Tragedy fiction makes you sad. SoL fiction makes you feel relaxed. And dark fantasy fiction makes you ponder what it means to be human in a dark world. What's...

Dude... I've read chapter 1. Honestly, my impression is "I didn't laugh." As an urban comedy, your story's premise actually has the potential to be entertaining with the comedy of misunderstandings. However, the execution is still far from perfect, making me think hard rather than being...

This thread should be placed in the I'm Looking For... section.

Just a suggestion for the feedback thread. You should copy and paste your prologue chapter into spoiler tags, and format it more easily by using one line per paragraph in the feedback thread. It will make it easier for the reviewer to read and also provide corrections directly to paragraphs that...

Respect others' privacy as we respect our own. Don't get too involved in other people's affairs unless absolutely asked. That's at least basic social etiquette to create a more peace and comfortable social environment.