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I'm glad one of my readers finally decide to be honest and just say my story sucks. Might be able to stop writing now.

Jesus, Texas is fucked.

Yeah, but they haven't been good for years. :s_tongue:

I tried making a flawed MC with my isekai and people just hate him as a result. No one wants to read about angst starring a loser, they say. :cry: You basically want what hauntedwritings is complaining about.

Hopefully my story isn't like that.

Those two are harem in the book.

Ha, this is what I'm thinking as well. I guess I should look up Mushoku Tensei to see how Rudy's children called their other mothers.

Seems like you're the perfect audience for my novel. Down there on the banner.

>tfw garbage isekai gets continued while the manga you like gets axed

Yeah, but in first person POV, I don't think the POV character will be aware of their own body language.

Should you write unconscious actions by your MC when you're writing in first person?

Isn't this too wordy? Whenever I write like that, I always have a lingering feeling that it's too much, especially when in a middle of a dialogue. Though for that case, yes, you have to clarify, since smirking usually means that you're smirking at something amusing that you're seeing. So if...

How about this? The MC says something, but then the next sentence, still in the same paragraph, describes an action the other person he's conversing with takes. "Ah, of course, my apologies." She beamed at my words before resuming my dance. Normally, I won't allow this since I feel it can get...

Tapping what? It's not always applicable.

I often feel odd just writing that. Feels too short.

This has been bugging me for a while. It's about whether or not I'm using too much descriptive words/sentences after the MC says something. So, something like this for example, context being the MC asking a girl to dance in a ballroom. "I thought you might want a dance," I said with a smirk...