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Reviewing a lot of stories quickly has been very useful, I've been reviewing for one day and I already realize I've made every mistake a new writer can make. Oh well, guess I just need to... Rewrite everything. At least writing is fun.

Let's go! I stopped reading at: I like this world building! But it feels odd for characters too just conveniently exposit without context. Like why are they talking about the shape of the world? Especially if neither character even knows what a planet is. Rather than saying it used to be part...

Ok! I will warn xianxia is not my genre of choice, so I probably would of stopped reading at the tags, so take my criticism with an extra tiny pinch of salt. However, I did read further. Your first sentence is good, very flowery but sets a mod and a tone. But after I would say the writing isn't...

Hmm! Quite good. I really like the premise of a story fixer and the the writing style is high quality and without errors. I stopped reading around halfway through chapter 3 though. This is not because it wasn't good, just a mismatch between genre and reader. Even with it's twists and meta story...

Submit and I shall read! I read until the second chapter, stopping at: Sort of a death by a thousand cuts. Throughout what I read there was a lot of odd phrases, like "only a white skin that had accompanied her since birth". This reads strangely, is it normal for skin to change after birth? Or...

Making a review thread with email notifications on was a mistake. Almost as much of a mistake as using my professional email to make this account.

Ok! sorry I almost missed you, you posted while I was reviewing sweeteggroll. I chose 'House of Amarin" because it was the one you most recently updated when I checked, and it's your profile photo (I think?) so I thought it might be your favourite. Well! You almost lost me in the first few...

That's easy, I've already some of yours. I read until about halfway through chapter 7. Overall it's quite easy to read, but I can tell English isn't your first language. The pacing feels very strange because your sentences are all very short. Maybe try using more connecting words and commas? I...

There are a lot of stories on this website and standing out among them is hard. When someone does click on your story most of the time they'll stop reading after the first few chapters or even after only the blurb. I will give your story a go and tell you when and why I stopped reading. I'm not...

Hello, would love to be critiqued by you. I'm very inexperienced writing so I'm expecting a harsh review. I think the title and cover are unique so I'm getting a lot of page views quickly, but only a tiny percent actually seem interested in reading past the first chapter. Story Edit: actually...