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err, um.... :sweating_profusely:

Shit sucks, hope you feel better soon. Also I hope you figure out your medication situation. Here's a work rant that's more funny then sad, then a silly story that made me sad.

Nyeh he hhe.... So many submissions.... I normally pride myself in reviewing quick, but 6 is too many for 1 sitting! Don't worry! I'll get back to you in a day or so! Wouldn't want to be like certain other reviewers who have backlogs.... Okay! Lettuce begin! I stopped reading here: My [Knight]...

Hum hum! Ok I think I'm mostly going with @Missivist suggestion because I have a few scenes and characters that can be modified to this purpose, and this could be the most fun. I think I will also include @OokamiKasumi's suggestion and include a soft of short glossary at the bottom of the...

Hmmmm.... This may well be workable

That's the problem though, I don't know what the audience will and won't know, and all the characters live on an archipelago! They have maritime tradition! But this is probably the most natural way...

Not pirates, they just travel on boats.... and steal things

Thankyou for such words of wisdom

Here chicky chicky. My Grain might be a little unripe, but I hope there's a kernel of goodness to it.

I'm writing a story with a lot boat terminology. I don't know much about boats, but I know a little and I'm researching any words I don't know. The problem is I have no idea if it's reasonable to expect others to know what something like 'starboard beam' means. There's other places I want use...

Har Har Ha! Now that my head is huge from kind words, let's go! Ok! I read the first chapter and I had difficulty following along. You introduce way too many characters too quickly! Bare in mind I'm not the brightest and have the attention span of a budgerigar, so your target audience might be...

Aw thanks for including me! I'm not sure counting people with general anxiety disorders really counts for much though since stress isn't really something that has much to do with my environment. Like I'm stressed, but I'm not being stressed by anything in particular, and objectively I probably...

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Ok! I stopped here: turning the demons within a 30 foot diameter to bones, then turning those bones into dust This is another one I'd say was a death of a thousand cuts. Nothing was awful, and you seem to have plenty of ideas, but there is a lot of odd English and in my opinion unwanted...

Even if I eventually give up on writing, I've found that my true passion is making fantasy maps.