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Maybe you mean... does this story have a hook that keeps readers reading the next chapter? Well, this is more of a preference and subjective matter. If you're targeting a specific audience (e.g., horror), your story might be good enough for them. But if you ask me, sorry... I'm not interested...

I appreciate your feedback. Pronoun issues?! That's certainly an issue... I need to check my work more carefully. Thank you. :blob_melt:

Thanks for your feedback, dude. :blob_salute: :blob_aww:

Thank you :blob_melt:

Thank you for your feedback. :blob_salute: :blob_melt:

Hook for My First Fantasy Romance Work Well, I'm trying to reactivate my old work. This is my only fiction that is not dark fantasy. It is a romance fantasy work with elements of drama, psychology, and josei. Here is the prologue (~1,8k words): My questions are more focused on the hook...

~400 words makes us think efficiently in writing. Lol

Are you asking satire? Try it: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1903686/building-world-peace-with-my-bloodthirsty-demon-army/

In traditional fiction, the narrator plays a dominant role in driving the story, often adopting a fireside storytelling approach where the narrator acts as the storyteller. Problems arise when this practice is carried over into creative writing, as the reader can't interact directly with the...

Thanks, dude. My goal was to validate the premise. If it's worth reading, I might follow it up to be a series. :blob_salute:

Please try mine again, dude. I'm trying to fix my hiatus fiction after rewriting it. I'm wondering if this prologue has a hook to keep readers interested. You don't need to dissect the manuscript technically, just give your opinion... are you interested in reading this fiction after reading the...

Please try my fiction again, sis. I'm trying to fix my hiatus fiction after rewriting it. I'm wondering if this prologue has a hook to keep readers interested. Thanks.

The basic level of reader is the 'listener'. They understand fiction through the explanations of the narrator. For example, children learn stories through bedtime stories. The advanced level is the 'interpreter'. They actively interpret the narrative, constructing an imaginative world, feeling...

I've provided detailed feedback here: https://www.scribblehubforum.com/threads/feed-back-on-my-first-story-is-appreciated.27819/

I leave you with this question before going offline: What's left for justice after the law dies?

There's nothing I can do for you. Reading and rating are entirely up to the reader's preference. I also won't force myself to read fiction that doesn't suit my tastes. Receiving a first rating often takes a lot of patience. My old fiction on RR took 7 months to receive its first rating. My...