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Let's do it together(?) ...I technically have another account that's way older, so I wonder if I still count.

I'm the type who gets bored if there's a clear plan. So I only decide on a loose framework for the entire novel, then I kinda... write whatever flows, and whatever details make the most sense. Whatever makes sense to be happening in the chapter, happens. Even said loose framework isn't...

Yeah, this is easily the variants. Not only are my older selfs gonna suck, it's better to share your head with three voices compared to seven. I wonder what my variants are gonna be like.

No matter how much I edit, things just DON'T FRICKING WORK AHHHHHHHHH

It's not bad. Explains everything that needs to be explained, and conceals what needs to be concealed. I personally don't like the rhythm of the words and how they sound spoken out loud, but except for that, it looks interesting.

Not that it looks bad, but I do not touch stories with the harem or ecchi tag. Someone else who's into this genre, please review this.

As someone who is trying to write my first LitRPG, and has never played RPG games before, this was incredibly helpful. I shall keep it all in mind! Thank you, Tyranomaster. And @ThisAdamGuy , let us work hard together. :blob_highfive:

First Impression: Cover looked pretty, synopsis sounded good, and I immediately got a sense for what the story was going to be about. I was just confused by the second paragraph in the synopsis, it's not clear whether this fact is later revealed, and is thus a spoiler, or not. It would be nice...

As someone also writing a LitRPG that leans heavily on the fantasy side of things, with the system existing pretty simply, I feel you soooo bad. I'll send it to you for a review swap. It's not published on Scribblehub yet, (I only wrote two chapters), but here is the Google doc...

Mwahahahaha...did someone say feedback? :blob_cookie: First Impression: I think you tried to go for 'an interesting quote' for the first line. I don't like it usually, but in this case it gets the point across. The title confused me; I thought this would be a story about a magic witch, not...

Slow burn doesn't matter. You can start slow, and still write well. There is nothing wrong with the idea of the scene itself, but by 'no charm', I meant the way you wrote it is boring.

I'll take another go, too. I used to be on Wattpad, which means...I have experience. Lmao. My eyes widened and I stared. Her sweet chest bobbed as she breasted down the stairs, the pair dancing with delight like hungry piranhas. Her countenance was that of a vixen virgin, but soft and naive as...

Since you said you don't care about the synopsis... in my mind it's the most important part of the novel, the introduction and marketing, but you do you... I'll focus on the content instead. I very much get the style you're trying to go for—heavy, contemplative, medieval vibes. I can see there...

Dream #00003 Math test. But with easy questions(?) 9!/2x3 ...That sucks. Poor little kitty...and why green? Instead of yellow or white? Dreams are weird.