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    Looking for Feedback on a Oneshot

    Personally, I don't think a conclusion or theme is all too important. As long as you made the reader feel something then you did your job. And things like pacing and grammar should come naturally as you write and read more.
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    Just want some feedback on my first chaper

    My advice to improve grammar is to read a book on it.
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    cyberpunk story with guns that can only be fired by those who have been deemed acceptable

    cyberpunk story with guns that can only be fired by those who have been deemed acceptable
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    welp, we had a good run. *packs up things and leaves*

    welp, we had a good run. *packs up things and leaves*
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    How do you write comedy?

    I imagined the scenario with the man simply walking over the opening as if it were ground.
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    Anime

    It turns out he wasn't playing her. She was in fact playing him without her even knowing. But then but then it turns out they weren't. The ending was so sad. :blob_teary::blob_teary::blob_teary:
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    How do you write comedy?

    Comedy doesn't work the same way with the written word as it does with more physical media, I mean, stuff like comics/manga, anime/shows, and movies. You can write physical comedy, but watching it happen would be much, much more effective. When I write comedy it's situational. Try to...
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    Anime

    Yo, guys, this darker than black MC is so fucked up. He's just playing her! I love it so much!
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    Anime

    *cough cough* I'm pretty bored. Browsing youtube. Looks at a bunch of a fancy TOP 10 ANIME. All of the anime are shit. Then I think about what good anime is. Then I think about the first animes I've watched. 2007 anime were the first anime I watched. The first ones I can recall are Black Cat...
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    Nothing is unobtainable!
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    Well, with that attitude it will be!

    Well, with that attitude it will be!
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    Why do you write?

    I want to have some worth in my life. And I believe the best way I can do that is to make people happy. And gaining ability in a skill gives me something to be proud of as well. It's a win-win. I can make myself happy and other people happy at the same time. One of the reasons I want to be a...
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    Have you ever had an idea you never made for one reason or another?

    Nope, I come up with my best ideas in the moment/while I'm writing.
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    My largest achievement as a writer as of yet definitely has to be when I learned how to spell.
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    I had something for Quantity vs Quality 3: Endgame, but I forgot what it was about. :blob_hmm_two:

    I had something for Quantity vs Quality 3: Endgame, but I forgot what it was about. :blob_hmm_two:
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    Quantity vs Quality 2: Electric Boogaloo

    You know, people don't very much like people who only contradict others. It's my opinion. All thumbs are fingers but not all fingers are thumbs.
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    Sooooooooo bored

    Sooooooooo bored
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    Quantity vs Quality 2: Electric Boogaloo

    No, I don't think so. Though I do believe the rate at which one can find the ideal depends greatly on the person.
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    Quantity vs Quality 2: Electric Boogaloo

    I don't think it's something that can be told or answered. It is something one can only learn themselves once they have read enough. Quite the cheek.
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    Quantity vs Quality 2: Electric Boogaloo

    Okay, so I've seen complaints in reviews about how a series isn't detailed enough, how it reads as if the story is a summary of the actual story. And some series, though it happens far less, some series have complaints in the reviews about how there's too much written without anything actually...
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