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    Feedback on re-written prologue.

    You're too hard on yourself. As long as you enjoy writing it and as long as someone enjoys reading it then what you write is good.
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    smart

    smart
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    Reminds me of Gokushufudou

    Reminds me of Gokushufudou
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    Ideally, yes, but that can be a big ask. :sweating_profusely:

    Ideally, yes, but that can be a big ask. :sweating_profusely:
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    Writing Prompt Murder Game

    Freakin' hilarious
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    For all good fiction, I think you need either a spin, a hook, or buildup.

    For all good fiction, I think you need either a spin, a hook, or buildup.
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    Writing Prompt Murder Game

    I love the idea of non-traditional classes
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    Writing Prompt Murder Game

    I was walking down a street when I heard a scuffle going on in an alleyway. One man was leaning against a wall, the other towered over him, and shouted, "give me your wallet already! Or things will get nasty." The mugger waved around his knife near the cowering man's face. I know I should have...
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    Writing Prompt Murder Game

    Loved it
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    Bad Storm misses you a whole bunch. I don't care for you, though

    Bad Storm misses you a whole bunch. I don't care for you, though
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    How do you plan out your story?

    This is my template: [boss room] [eruption and arrival] [distraction and stab] [phase 2] [drops] Each of those usually fills up a couple hundred words. Back when I wrote 600 word long chapters I never planned at all and it kind of worked out for me. Now that I'm planning 2400 word long...
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    Yo, what happened to you on nuf?

    Yo, what happened to you on nuf?
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    Implemented Fairer sorting of lists

    :blob_popcorn::blob_popcorn::blob_popcorn:
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    Feeling intimidated by the bombastic language people use in their stories.

    I dropped the lies of locke lamora and Circe exactly because the language was too flowery. Sometimes I think it's like sensory override where it's completely unnecessary. But sometimes one word can do what two words or a whole sentence can. The best thing to do is the only thing you can do: the...
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    Great article on POV and narrative distance

    I actually could really use this. I've been writing in first person and have been feeling extremely limited compared to when I wrote in third. I have to make sure I only describe things that the MC can perceivably perceive. And I have to shift the narrative style from one of omniscient where I...
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    Making stat screens takes foreveeer [MEDIA]

    Making stat screens takes foreveeer
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    I'll do you one better. What is odd jamn

    I'll do you one better. What is odd jamn
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    For all you who are struggling to write even though you love it

    I recommend The Elements of Style as it's a third of the length of Writing Down the Bones and gets to the point quite quickly. I don't like books that liken short stories about one's life to actual writing advice/guidelines.
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    Writing Prompt Murder Game

    Going to a church to reset skill points is genius! Exactly like Dragon Quest!
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    Writing Prompt Murder Game

    You sick, insane, ingenious ********. I didn't even think about that. What if another MC was introduced, one who escaped one of those farms! Oh my god. So many of the things your're saying. Yes to all of them! Okay, how about the girl is like a childhood friend of the MC and they grew distant...
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