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  1. UYScuti

    Flooding is rough. Everyone should snorkel their car.

    Flooding is rough. Everyone should snorkel their car.
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    Hmph. This place does not deserve my outer layers. I’d rather blast them clear with my stellar...

    Hmph. This place does not deserve my outer layers. I’d rather blast them clear with my stellar winds. Besides, I don’t want people peeking in on me until I’m sporting an iron core.
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    It was sunny out today. Perhaps too sunny. I believe our power grid couldn’t handle the cloud...

    It was sunny out today. Perhaps too sunny. I believe our power grid couldn’t handle the cloud free sky and decided to take a break. It’s a good thing it’s winter, though. The air isn’t too bad now. It’s kind of like when you’re in a closed bathroom taking a hot shower type humidity. If it was...
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    How much would you spend on valentine’s chocolate? (Poll)

    I didn’t read the options, just the title. To answer that, I plan to spoil myself this year, so I’ve set no limit.
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    How do you feel about people giving your story a bad rating for no apparent reason?

    I’m not sure many people give scores other than 1’s and 5’s on SH. I take it as people like it or don’t. As the proud owner of a mediocre story, I would say only worry about those who comment. Since most people on SH don’t comment, don’t worry. :blobthumbsup:
  6. UYScuti

    :blob_hmm_two: So I can get my stew dribble on anywhere. This is gonna revolutionize the soup game.

    :blob_hmm_two: So I can get my stew dribble on anywhere. This is gonna revolutionize the soup game.
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    I’ll have you know, me and Trending Chan have been seeing each other recently. We haven’t made...

    I’ll have you know, me and Trending Chan have been seeing each other recently. We haven’t made anything official, but I’m hoping our one day rendezvous will turn into something slow and steady :blob_sir:
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    Anyone else let 1 or 2 bad reviews knock their confidence?

    I think SH is a pretty forgiving place. As for bad ratings or reviews, I won’t tell you to shrug them off, because it’s impossible. But you should think of it this way. You are putting yourself out there, for both the negative and the positive. You can’t control what you get. But at least you...
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    :blob_aww: Yay! Thank you thank you. Type II supernova on the way! It’s all thanks to...

    :blob_aww: Yay! Thank you thank you. Type II supernova on the way! It’s all thanks to @Assurbanipal_II I better start writing some infodumps or A2’s gonna get mad :sweating_profusely:
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    What do you think of my novel?

    Alright, Daddy, I read the prologue. Sometimes you write in the present tense, and other times you write in the past tense. There are times when singular nouns and verbs should be plural and vice versa. You have quite a few comma splices, meaning you’re linking two sentences with a comma. You...
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    Wait, now that I remember. Didn’t you say you had no idea what frontliners were when there were...

    Wait, now that I remember. Didn’t you say you had no idea what frontliners were when there were two paragraphs about who they were in the first chapter :blob_no:
  12. UYScuti

    :blob_cookie: When you asked me to explain something, and I pointed to the info in a previous...

    :blob_cookie: When you asked me to explain something, and I pointed to the info in a previous chapter...
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    :blob_hmm_two: Maybe A2 is an engineer.

    :blob_hmm_two: Maybe A2 is an engineer.
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    First person POV is an excellent choice for horror/mystery/thrillers. It allows the reader to...

    First person POV is an excellent choice for horror/mystery/thrillers. It allows the reader to see the world completely through the characters eyes. First person narrators are unreliable, horror/mystery/thrillers use that to their advantage. I write a space opera in third person limited because...
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    A2 does not like me weaving in details throughout the chapters like traditional...

    A2 does not like me weaving in details throughout the chapters like traditional horror/mystery/thriller books do. Wants me to info-dump instead. Doesn’t like first person POV either. Wants google POV :blob_pout:
  16. UYScuti

    ? I see.

    ? I see.
  17. UYScuti

    Who’s aggrieved?

    Who’s aggrieved?
  18. UYScuti

    FS, what’s so hard to understand? Militia’s->weapons->MC insults->loli’s->crystal beasts->BL...

    FS, what’s so hard to understand? Militia’s->weapons->MC insults->loli’s->crystal beasts->BL Seems pretty standard to me.
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    :blob_pat_sad: The signs are all there. Weaved within the chapters is everything you need to...

    :blob_pat_sad: The signs are all there. Weaved within the chapters is everything you need to know. Yep. Definitely gonna need to do a monster info-dump prologue. 10k word info-dump. Maybe call them info-dump 1,2, 3.
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    Calling her a little girl. :sweating_profusely: You trying to get me arrested. An old man...

    Calling her a little girl. :sweating_profusely: You trying to get me arrested. An old man posting stories about a little girl. Geez. She’s 22.
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