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It doesn't flow. Try reading the lines out loud.

That lion isn't dead. It's just extremely floppy.

Let's drop the futa thing? Unless we want to actually get into the politics and fetishizing of transfolk? Not a fun discussion, even for the political football. --- I'm well-actually about pacing in fights. Shit's happening fast, but authors have characters doing lengthy yammering during...

Speaking as a humanitarian, I'm ok with vegan meat if they're free-range.

Taskmaster season 1. The live action adaptation.

I try to block out most author's notes and songs unless they're mentioned at the end. Lyrics are a special horror.

When people count by twelves, they would use a thumb and the finger knucles of that hand. Source: some dude on youtube.

> What are common mistakes using this trope? 1. That everyone in the new world is unsophisticated. 2. That no one in the new world has ever mixed wood ash, water, and fats to make soap. Or bathes. 3. That no one in the new world uses visualization or basic science to learn magic.

Bargue Drawings. Marc Taro Holmes's Tea Milk Honey handout.

Young-Hae Chang Heavy Industries has a pretty compelling argument.

> What do you think? Can a purely card-based battle system be pulled off in a non-visual medium like a novel? Can you think of any stories that do that? I think it is hard to do well. And doesn't need to be done at all. Plus it puts barriers between the reader and the action. Any other...

> The problem is i don't know how to go about it. Should i just forget the dark tone and keep doing what i have been doing? ... write what flows, as long as it seems decent to you. Maybe.

> Or however this girl's parents actually named her ?‍♀️??

And here I've been adding chocolate chips like a fool.

> What advice you can give to me. Have enough illustrative detail: --- Beyond that, write what's fun to write!

It's not gambling, it is a duel. How society handles that is established law and custom.

Oops.

"Lilith: Origin of Succubi" https://www.scribblehub.com/read/538690-lilith-origin-of-succubi/chapter/538699/#:~:text=Chapter%201-,Lilith%3A%20Origin%20of%20Succubi,-by%20Saine --- "Isekai’d Shoggoth"...

The former. The latter is better for plot reasons.