> But is that a good thing or a turn off?
Bi-modal. There are people looking for this, there are people mildly disinterested, and those that moderately dislike it. I believe the latter includes a subset of transwomen who are tired of being fetishized or who find the subject involves personal...
Purge every grammar error from your first five chapters.
Axe the prologue, unless it's an engaging action scene. Most prologues are unnecessary and are so boring as to be alienating.
Axe the currency conversion and cultivation level details unless they're actually iiiiinteresting and plot...
Fascists. More broadly, those with no compassion for human suffering.
Stand my ground and spray blood from eyes, or dive into the bushes while my severed tail distracts them.
> Physio
As a guideline, if you have any repeated ache or pain that's not gut, head, or teeth, see a physiotherapist. Even if you blame the deskchair, the shoes, the mattress, the trackpad, the counter height.
Physiotherapist.
> Can't be bothered with names
>rusty-orange haired human kid
r.o.h.h.k -> "rohk"
>"otaku" friend who's all into mythical figures
Ofwaimf ... "Fram."
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Use as placeholders until irritation sparks inspiration.
> My current book starts off with a group of gods speaking with one another so that the reader can learn about how the set universe came to
Umm. As ... speaking not as a sophisticated reader or a widely read reader but as a prolific reader, that's the kind of prologue I will either skip, read...