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My date and I got some fresh donuts from krispy cream and we were driving back at night, cop pulls me over. Cop: "How much have you had to drink?" Me: Nothing officer. Cop: I saw you drive over the line. Where are you coming from Me (wearing a krispy cream paper hat): Did I? Sorry I just...

As for fictions with racism ... Putting them in a fantasy world is just that, fantasy. I would argue that having contemporary morals in a non contemporary setting ruins the world building. That being said , readers don't like a bully. So keep that in mind.

One of the ways to avoid this making the character seem like a bully is a POV swap. If the fight is going to be a curb stomp do it not from the protagonist view

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2nded on the hollow. Not really sure what is supposed to stand out, everything is kinda generic. Also, some em-dashes.... I don't like those, plus grammar issues, mostly run ons. Expecting: A hook in the first chapter. Reality: No hook, just slice of life. Suggestion: Redo first...

Usually avoid cultivation novels. So no, after cradle I got burnt out on them so unless someone recommends it I pass.

Alan Greenspan is 99 years old

Favorite rage against the machine song. I think the guy who it is about finally got freedom, just took....a...really...long..time.

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