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Rant: Insurance companies suck, they say trim the trees or we will drop you. But the trees are on the neighbors property, and are over 50' tall.... Could get in big trouble for trespassing.

Such question mark Very inquiries Wow!

Paragraphing needs work. For max clarity each character gets its own paragraph. Both of these are Clara. Combine. First noun is brown hair, this is bad. Pick a character or group of characters and focus on that. Making this a Clara, Serena, Erna paragraph is bad. Stuff like that is confusing.

I can haz chesborger?

Why do the chicken have duck feet?

thinks this is kinda cool.

Trying to find old anti-suffrage propaganda is hard, would post but thinking it is maybe a bit offensive. Even if the stuff is more history than politics at this point? IDK.

Nothing! I just wanted to add more gender bending that didn't happen in 1 chapter and not matter the rest of the novel. But while that is not the norm, it is hardly unique.

Overtly Trivial Problem? What is this OTP

I should do that too.

Rant: The tv series of foundation doesn't do justice to the book. The main guy comes across like andrew ryan from bioshock in the book. But the story is full of esoteric stuff which there is none of in Isaac Asamof's writing.