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    Ai-chan!

    Ai-chan!
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    Blob Art because I can't Art

    ...cute Not that I care humph
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    Writing The thing with pronouns

    The problem I think is not pronouns with this paragraph but the paragraphing itself. 1.) Each character in an action scene gets their own paragraph. 2.) Only put the actions of one character in that paragraph. EX: Action scenes should be like turns in an RPG. (Player 1 does x) (player...
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    No more Praise Anon thread.

    While anonunlimited is not in the files, Anon is. However, Anon2023 isn't, I bet that Anon2021 might be though, that guy was sus.
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    Everyone thinks Mohamed Ali was the greatest black boxer. But Joe Lewis is 10x better. Why...

    Everyone thinks Mohamed Ali was the greatest black boxer. But Joe Lewis is 10x better. Why? President Roosevelt met with him before the fight in 1938 and told him it was important for him to win against Max Schmeling. In 1936 Hitler took great interest in Max winning.
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    random stuff

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    IMO, Samuel L. Jackson is the most badass interviewee ever, when the host awkwardly asked him...

    IMO, Samuel L. Jackson is the most badass interviewee ever, when the host awkwardly asked him about his role in Django... his response was perfect.
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    Senpai?

    Senpai?
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    oh my

    oh my
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    random stuff

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    :blob_melt:

    :blob_melt:
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    парень ?

    парень ?
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    I thought Corty was Estonian

    I thought Corty was Estonian
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    No burnt bread!

    No burnt bread!
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    This might be important somehow...

    This might be important somehow...
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    Was listening to a sermon where the preacher said the prophet Habakkuk had a question mark for a...

    Was listening to a sermon where the preacher said the prophet Habakkuk had a question mark for a head.
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    Y'all Think I Can Pull off a Four-way War?

    My question wouldn't be can this be handled. The proof would be reader receptiveness. Possible complaints: 1.) Too slow 2.) Faction shallow Too much depth would cause the story to drag, get to 100k words and still the MC hasn't fought the 4 factions that could be one feedback. Another...
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    Why A Lot Of Writing Advice Fails Writers

    Nah not AI IMO, Marc makes scripts in an academic writing style. I asked co-pilot to make an essay called "Why writing advice Often fails" You can see the difference.
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