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Can I just buy a replacement skeleton?

Dear Diary, Today I'm slowly working on writing my fake diary about normal girl things and definitely not anything involving psychosis. The end~

I guess this is the spam hour.

Story is alright overall. I read both chapters you have currently. I feel neutral, not impressed but don't think it's bad either. Only issues I see is: 1. Description stacking. My edit: “A low, hypnotic voice resonated in her chest. Heat rose to her face.” 2. Repetition Nitpicks that stuck...

I have french friends, you don't. Je sais qui tu es. Je te trouverai, et je te tuerai... tu n'es pas un vrai Français

Yeah, I didn't see the quote of who posted it and deleted my post as I'm busy, but probably shouldn't discuss problematic figures much like politics anyway.

Since I've been tagged, I'll just say that the synopsis is indeed very inconsistent and unnecessary with questionable implications due to the 18+ disclaimer. But I wouldn't go as far to outright call it child abuse material since nothing I've seen up to chapter 4 depicts anything of that nature...

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@Hans.Trondheim

Sometimes I wonder if people ever scream so loud in their head, you can hear it. Or give themselves tinnitus.