The first five chapters were about navigating school life as an illegitimate daughter of the king but the sixth was second guessing feelings for a dandy and if he truly loved her....no.. just no.
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Dropped another novel for excessive passive voice and excessive internal monologue.
I tried out a new book and the entire first chapter was dialogue....no...just no..
Edited chapter 9, trimmed about 500 words.
Posted chapter 60 of magical girl. It is another slime girl chapter.
I was trying to figure out where the quote "I am become death the destroyer of worlds" that Oppenheimer mentioned and ran across a Hindi theologian bashing the professor about how that is a bad translation and how he was imposing a christian view on a hindi sacred text. However they neglected to mention that Oppenheimer was not a christian.....
I got a notif on review thread but instead of something thoughtful it looked like a spam bot.
I was thinking of picking up a power supply at a local pc shop only to find they all went out of business.
Chapter 8 edited. I cut out about 500 words so that is some progress.
Got Chapter 7 edited. (Note to self, 3000 word chapters are easier to tackle then 6000 word ones)
One of the things I really like about light novels is that they are conscise.
Apparently the trick to be successful on KU is to release something every month. I read an article saying splitting up a story into 200 page chunks is a good strategy.
Rend is a fun romp so far.
I'm curious, do you read my feedback of other stories or not? Asking this question because of your recent thread about reviews.
I got chapter 3 of magical girl edited. Past me needs to be slapped for using present tense. No wonder I never got trending.
@Hans.Trondheim have a good forum vacation.
I was watching this documentary about exploitation films and they made the point that those were the only ones pushing the boundaries.
Bleh, I picked up a new space opera but dropped it about 70% because instead of characters they had names that just did whatever to jarringly set up the next plot twist.
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