Recent content by Talon88.1

For me AI editing for things like checking grammar and punctuation, asking it to look for overly repeating word choice, or asking it to look for places to punch up a description, perfectly fine. When someone's just putting in 'write me a story vaguely around these characters and these themes'...

First off, thank you for the offer to critique :D Always looking for feedback and ways to improve. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1915090/shadows-in-the-sand-warhammer-k/

Sure, hit me! Not a comedy mind, so if you skip for that fair enough :D https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1915090/shadows-in-the-sand-warhammer-k/

Not unsafe? Why would I feel threatened by them? Im just curious about the story visibility. But damn, scribbles took down all tags? Sucks.

So its been a while, and I figured it was just a mistake, but did GW clamp down or send a threatening letter? Why has the 40k fandom and tag been removed?

Always looking to improve, edited several chunks based on a roasters review too. Please and thank you! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1915090/shadows-in-the-sand-warhammer-k/

Always looking for a critique to improve! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1915090/shadows-in-the-sand-warhammer-/ As for inspiration, it was literally just me brainstorming ideas and this one grabbed hold of my brain and refused to let go.

It really wasnt intended for a general audience, I write primarily to sharpen my skills :D As for the atmo, I can agree with trimming it down some, but overall, Im not a webnovel writer, and I dont really have any intention of making my writing more palatable to the short attention spans. If...

First off, thank you for your time! And I can see the issues, chapter 2's length came about because I had scenes in my head and I was on a roll, so I didn't really think about the length :D In most cases I try to hit 20 pages as a bare minimum for chapters, as I normally take roughly two weeks...

Always looking for feedback, anything to help me improve! Please and thank you :D https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1915090/shadows-in-sand-warhammer-/

Bumping in the hopes of getting some feedback :P

Ah, when I think of a power fantasy I usually picture a single person, not a faction as a whole, so thats likely the disconnect there.

Star trek was a power fantasy? IDK about that, but to be fair, the only one I watched all the way through was DS9 and bits of TNG, so Im pretty far from well versed in it :D

Its not an isekai, a power fantasy, a self insert, a crossover or anything like what the market has saturated with.

Gravity folds space, (and technically time as well but we'll leave that out for sake of simplicity) Therefore, if you control gravity well enough, you can fold space so that one side of the 'blade' in this case is offset from the other side of the blade. Thus, you swing it, and anything that...