Hey all, looking for feedback on my story.
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Only ten chapters in, but I got another 40 chapters on backlog, just going to be dropping those over time.
I know its far from perfect, but always looking to improve.
Shadows in the Sand (Warhammer 40,000)
He came from the sand and the silence, carrying yesterday's ghosts. On Morrak II — a forgotten world choked by dust storms and old war-wounds — survival is a daily negotiation with hunger, rust, and the whims of machine-priests who no longer understand their own relics. Elissa Brandt has kept...
I know its far from perfect, but always looking to improve.