ElijahRyne
A Hermit that’s NOT that Lazy, currentlycomplainen 24 From My teacher is on a research base near the
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Was listening to my story and everything sounded good, until the 3rd chapter hit, will post here when I finish the first arc. Approximately 6-8 more chapters. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-qpLyHm5HVoxOLvIau4VTUO2fDIM4N-hznKwaShjhKI/edit?usp=drivesdk
I feel like you got this before, but Imma do it anyway.
My knees hurt and feel weird, even at rest. Like they are locking when I walk or something.
It's time to d-d-d-duel ElijahRyne!
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My gut feels horrid atm…
Improved the quality of chapters 1-3 with a few reworks, and extra paragraphs, and a new paragraph at the end. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-qpLyHm5HVoxOLvIau4VTUO2fDIM4N-hznKwaShjhKI/edit?usp=drivesdk
Why so many cultural revolution songs? 1/5 of the music in my YT mixes tend to be one, or of the Chinese New Left, assuming I am getting my terms correct. They are fine, and some sound quite good, but I just want my North Korean propaganda music.
Somewhat reworked CH 2 to have more action, still needs more work. So does CH 1, but it is good enough for me to continue to ch 4+ for now. Am mostly happy with the prologue, however I can see if the grandfather’s monologue is too flowery I understand where you are coming from, but that is the point imo. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-qpLyHm5HVoxOLvIau4VTUO2fDIM4N-hznKwaShjhKI/edit?usp=drivesdk
I know I have said it before, but this song showed up again in a YT mix and once again I marvel in its beauty.
Chatgpt sure is useful.
Just learned that my previously "long months cough" had mostly 2 factors : -lingering bacteria in trachea OR -nerves being over sensitive (and likely 3rd) -staying in contact with allergens. -
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