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Coldwarrior12
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My lesbian Harem MC levels up by banging girls. Should I be arrested or published?
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Coldwarrior12
Coldwarrior12
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Guys I don't know if I'm doing alright or doing badly at writing my story.
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DearDire
DearDire
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157
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A_veil_of_red_ink
Blackbriar
Request For Feedback - ODNT
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1
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79
CharlesEBrown
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Need feedback/review for my new fantasy novel!
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1
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150
Humanistheart
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Never knew forum can be used! Feedback time!
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93
Yuzai_Rearu
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Check out this story about a scammer who gets tasked to hunt a vampire in which he doesn´t believe!
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0
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86
PWilkes
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GreenLemonShark
Lots Of Views, But No Favorites, Where Am I Dropping The Ball?
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423
CharlesEBrown
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Could someone please tell me if I still overdescribe things and my dialogues feel unnatural?
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3
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348
RepresentingWrath
RepresentingWrath
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Can you please check out my story and tell me what you think?
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3
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295
Axiweave
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Help me Reader-wan Kenobi! You're my only hope.
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3
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247
Roney
Roney
Roney
Can I get some real feedback?
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5
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305
Roney
Roney
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I have trouble with hooks and currently open to feedback swaps.
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1K
Trashcat
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I want feedback please.
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3
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197
WhaleSprite
WhaleSprite
MikoLeer
Looking for Feedback
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5
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370
MikoLeer
MikoLeer
Cookiez_N_Potionz
I'm Back, Hello
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0
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81
Cookiez_N_Potionz
Cookiez_N_Potionz
Mercuryo
New novel, Feedback and writting overall
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1
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152
GrotesqueHeaven
GrotesqueHeaven
Aphel
Yet another fool asking for reviews :D
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213
Aphel
Aphel
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Sharing my first real story – would love thoughts if anyone’s open to it
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2
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248
TheAGamer
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Please give feedbacks
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2
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186
Nightmaystay
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