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Feedback for my sci-fi novel « Project: Aegis »
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jupitrion
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PinkLemon
Feedback for my webnovel "Kikai Unmei"
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6
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467
PinkLemon
PinkLemon
flopforeverr
pls don't let it flop
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1
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244
LeilaniOtter
LeilaniOtter
S
Could i get any feedback on my first chapter?
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Max02
Max02
Leonotis
New comic Chapter is out!
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133
Leonotis
Leonotis
V8485
If possible could I get some feedback for my first chapter.
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115
V8485
V8485
Siegburn
Return of the Villainess Harem Novel
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3
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350
Golden_Hyde
Golden_Hyde
VanVeleca
The first murder of my mystery novel has finally occured!
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15
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CharlesEBrown
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BLIGHT_ZERO
Give me your honest opinion on my lil 4 chap story
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7
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259
LeilaniOtter
LeilaniOtter
Intermundium
Chapter 1 Feedback
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1
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136
Eldoria
Eldoria
Shanikumar
Need an honest opinion about letest chapter of my dark fantasy supernatural ? novel weather it's harsh or brutal
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4
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239
LevJrtheWriter
LevJrtheWriter
sandianchong
The Hacker Empire couldn't get enough of it, so they wrote a new story about an adventure in a virtual world.
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0
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111
sandianchong
sandianchong
flopforeverr
The cliffhanger
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81
flopforeverr
flopforeverr
LeilaniOtter
I'll review first chapters... ?
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164
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LeilaniOtter
LeilaniOtter
LevJrtheWriter
New Author Here – Sharing My First Story, “The Island of No Return”
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84
LevJrtheWriter
LevJrtheWriter
J
Plot ideas?
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2
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135
LeilaniOtter
LeilaniOtter
Frostsystems
Sci Fi / Fantasy Story Critique + Tag Recommendations
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0
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78
Frostsystems
Frostsystems
HellsPerfectSpawn
Soo, any thoughts, critique or feedback for the following?
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8
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331
HellsPerfectSpawn
HellsPerfectSpawn
R
I need opinions on this dialogue
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3
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198
empalgepuk
empalgepuk
flopforeverr
Please check it out
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4
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203
flopforeverr
flopforeverr
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