I'll review first chapters... ?

[LeilaniOtter]

Waaaaah you still reviewing first chapters? Please review mine.

Vampdemgo

In a world where creatures live among humans, Adrian Dusk, a vampire with a desire for a normal life, finds himself a pawn in a larger game. When strange occurrences plague his new high school, he and two unlikely allies, the snarky demon Kael Inferno and the quiet ghost Elias...

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What @Worthy39 said. *^^*

 

[LevJrtheWriter]

Still reviewing chapters? Ive been writing this book for about 2 years. Friends and family told me they like it and pushed me to get it off my computer onto a site. If you could that would be awesome.

The Island of No Return

 

[Worthy39]

Still reviewing chapters? Ive been writing this book for about 2 years. Friends and family told me they like it and pushed me to get it off my computer onto a site. If you could that would be awesome.

The Island of No Return
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Guys, all she asks is you contact her privately, not just put it up here. All you gotta do is tap on her profile to see the option. I feel like I'm becoming a secretary...

 

[LevJrtheWriter]

Guys, all she asks is you contact her privately, not just put it up here. All you gotta do is tap on her profile to see the option. I feel like I'm becoming a secretary...

New here man. Couldn't really navigate at the time on my phone. saw it said I could still post here so I thought id do that.

 

[LeilaniOtter]

To reach me for a professional review of your first chapter only (or Prologue and First Chapter), please respond via private message. You can do so by cursoring over my cute otter self, and click on "Start Conversation". *^^*