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Boundless
What can you say about my* two protagonists?
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Boundless
Boundless
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Is my work too crude for an average reader ?
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Eldoria
Eldoria
Playerkartik
I'd really really appreciate a review(Chapter 1)
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104
Playerkartik
Playerkartik
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I’d Really Appreciate Your Feedback
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8
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200
fatboy_project_official
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Cookiez_N_Potionz
Would Love Some Feedback! ☮️
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172
Cookiez_N_Potionz
Cookiez_N_Potionz
LastMinami
Great Gods of writing, I ask you please for a review of my three chapters, please.
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48
LastMinami
LastMinami
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Really appreciate your opinions on my novel
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22
Dyslexer
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TinaMigarlo
Feedback requested
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5
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104
TinaMigarlo
TinaMigarlo
C
Review of the work "The Mad Immortal"
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38
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mythosandmagic
World building balance
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6
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87
mythosandmagic
mythosandmagic
R
I need opinions about a chapter
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3
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133
Daeron
Daeron
MakBow
Opening Scene
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4
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54
Yusrohemendator
Yusrohemendator
C
Feedback on my action block.
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10
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139
babywrath
babywrath
VM_Belwynd
Question about oversharing or lore dumping in story?
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70
babywrath
babywrath
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The firstest chapter of my novel
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3
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85
Daeron
Daeron
epohalt
First Alright-Ish Story
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4
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82
epohalt
epohalt
Nyctoria
Shameless Feedback Thread [OPEN]
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431
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OtherSlater
One Word Review
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19
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214
epohalt
epohalt
MC-Stories
Tales Of Megacity 0!
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1
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43
Sunsetinapainting
Sunsetinapainting
OtherSlater
Do You Like the People?
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1
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72
Sunsetinapainting
Sunsetinapainting
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