One Word Review

OtherSlater

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I will read an undisclosed amount and give you ONE word how I feel.

If I like it, maybe I'll give you TWO
 

Playerkartik

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MC-Stories

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Don't know if you have already read this, but just in case...
 

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Review of what? Our stories? Our names? Our birth dates? Our favorite pasta? Our best memes? Our favorite Pokémon? Our spirit animals?
Reviewing us kissing.
Review my name.
Punny.
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Fine.
 

OtherSlater

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As long as that one word comes with one star, that sounds delightful!
“Ooooh, smart whore!” Seto’s cock began to harden in his tight leather pants.

Your prose is amazing btw. Breaking my rule because I love the people in this story. I kinda like everyone is so sex positive and comfortable so far, as a poly person.
review the political and economical state of the world right now. (or my book)
PARAGRAPHS!
If you can spare some time, i would appreciate your review on rest of my book. You can check it out here.
By the way i like your profile pic.
Thanks.
Okay, Decent.
 
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Representing_Tromba

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Would you take a look at either
And/Or
 

OtherSlater

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Would you take a look at either
And/Or
Read thigh story

Um...Need?!
 

RepresentingCaution

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Your prose is amazing btw. Breaking my rule because I love the people in this story. I kinda like everyone is so sex positive and comfortable so far, as a poly person.
Thanky! I really need to get back to it someday, but parenting has been a lot more than I bargained for. I'm hanging on to hope, though. The kid needs to be flossed now.
 

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Mine?

 

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epohalt

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hi! uhm honestly i know my story needs more prose and a better narrative voice but id still like to hear that one word.

story here
 
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