CheertheSecond
The second coming of CheertheDead
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Assuming the two are your average people.

Depends... Who's the bad guy here. Is it the son? The mother? Are they both bad, or is it just a misunderstanding?Assuming the two are your average people.
Depends... Who's the bad guy here. Is it the son? The mother? Are they both bad, or is it just a misunderstanding?
It all depends on where you want the story to go and how you want it to end.
Maybe the son bullied, but the mother don't care. Instead, she indulge in drinking and gambling to forget her dead husband.
Of course, it's also possible that the mother is doing her best and trying to find a job, but the son is just too preoccupied with his own social life, spending time on new clothes, girls and even drugs.
Honestly, a love-hate relationship between a mother and her son is a very basic part of human life and is so common, that you can make it into anything you want.
Starting from a drug addict mother ignoring her son, and ending with a rebel child trying to overthrow his queen mother to take the kingdom's throne.
-Abuse (physical or mentally)
-Betrayal
-Mistake huge enough, that could change destiny
-Unfairness (her divorcing dad, and prefering new relationship and denying old one)
-Scum, very scummy
-Bad reputation (onlyfans moms)(some twitter buzz like the ex-wife of the "(not)deadbeat dad" that put the dad in jail and everyone commenting she likely brainwashed her daughter to think the dad is evil, the "cake baking mom tiktok" that faked crying while baking cakes for children when in fact, she doesnt have custody [dad having 24/7 full custody which is a mega low probability to happen, unless mom very scummy], had scam history, faked cancer to get donations, had jail time)
-Retarded mom (and causing troubles)
-Feminist mom
-Woke mom
-Woke mom that destroy the favorite IPs of the world
-Forcing gender on child, mom
-Dictator mom (both meaning of "control" in parenting and real politician dictator)
-Mom having causing troubles to humanity
-Cult leader mom
-Rapist mom
-Violent mom that beat dad
-Mom that jailed the dad unfairly
-Mom that unfairly took custody of the child-you, when you dislike her, and prefer the dad
-Pedo mom
-Nymphomaniac mom
-Cheating with others, mom, betraying dad
-Killer mom
-Twitter addict mom with brainrot
-Kidnapper mom, that stole you, the child, from real parents
-Loan (gambler) mom, that always beg the child of money
-Junky drug mom
-Cockblocking/relationship destroyer mom
-Mom taking you-the-child hostrage with gun
-Mom abandonning child at birth (with bad reasons) (with good reasons moms too if they had alternatives)
-World destroyer mom
-Mom giving birth to you while having STDs
-Incest mom
-Mom forcing you to give your organs to the prefered child (happens sometimes as the beginning of some chinese novels)
-Organ seller mom
-Child trafficker mom
-Polluting mom (some stars using private jet EVERYDAY, rivaling the environment destruction of Rome empire history)
-Never loved you-mom
-Compulsive liar mom
-Mega giga annoying mom
-Inhumane parenting mom
-Mom attracting troubles (assassins, killers, loan sharks, gov, police)
-Mom causing you to go to wrong path (a medieval old story of a mom that kept praising her son despite him stealing bigger and bigger growing up, until he was executed)
-Mom that birthed the child only to get the money
-Mega stingy mom to the point of unhealthy
-Very sick mom that need attention (despite the child being normal, a certain % of "normies" would likely wish her death if her "daily care" isnt acceptable to them)
-Cannibalism mom
-Cannibalism mom that made you eat "meat" too (not knowing the truth)
-Cannibalism mom eating you
-Attention craving mom
-Fat mom (depend how much)
-Embarrassing mom (depend how much)
tldr :
A mom doing a (quantitively heavy) sin
that affect the child (or others)
...The fuck? You for real, dude?The mom is the protag of my story. The story ended with the son finally won a hard battle against his exhausted and tattered mother. He then stripped her naked and let his tormentors torture her in public for days until he chopped off her neck at the last moment of her consciousness. She would later sell her soul to get a wish which she used to wish that her son would have somebody in his life that healed the wounds she caused him when she was still a young and dumb mother.
...The fuck? You for real, dude?
Don't you think it's a little too extreme and superficial?
I mean, it's his mother and all, so instead of humiliating and torturing her, don't you think a quick death would be better?
Also, selling her soul for a wish?
I don't want to sound mean, but dude, you should chill down and calmly think for a moment.
Some people are just not worth a redemption, and some scars are better left buried within. So chill down, dude... And think, not about what you the author want to happen, but about what would your character do in this situation.
Congrats, robot!-Abuse (physical or mentally)
-Betrayal
-Mistake huge enough, that could change destiny
-Unfairness (her divorcing dad, and prefering new relationship and denying old one)
-Scum, very scummy
-Bad reputation (onlyfans moms)(some twitter buzz like the ex-wife of the "(not)deadbeat dad" that put the dad in jail and everyone commenting she likely brainwashed her daughter to think the dad is evil, the "cake baking mom tiktok" that faked crying while baking cakes for children when in fact, she doesnt have custody [dad having 24/7 full custody which is a mega low probability to happen, unless mom very scummy], had scam history, faked cancer to get donations, had jail time)
-Retarded mom (and causing troubles)
-Feminist mom
-Woke mom
-Woke mom that destroy the favorite IPs of the world
-Forcing gender on child, mom
-Dictator mom (both meaning of "control" in parenting and real politician dictator)
-Mom having causing troubles to humanity
-Cult leader mom
-Rapist mom
-Violent mom that beat dad
-Mom that jailed the dad unfairly
-Mom that unfairly took custody of the child-you, when you dislike her, and prefer the dad
-Pedo mom
-Nymphomaniac mom
-Cheating with others, mom, betraying dad
-Killer mom
-Twitter addict mom with brainrot
-Kidnapper mom, that stole you, the child, from real parents
-Loan (gambler) mom, that always beg the child of money
-Junky drug mom
-Cockblocking/relationship destroyer mom
-Mom taking you-the-child hostrage with gun
-Mom abandonning child at birth (with bad reasons) (with good reasons moms too if they had alternatives)
-World destroyer mom
-Mom giving birth to you while having STDs
-Incest mom
-Mom forcing you to give your organs to the prefered child (happens sometimes as the beginning of some chinese novels)
-Organ seller mom
-Child trafficker mom
-Polluting mom (some stars using private jet EVERYDAY, rivaling the environment destruction of Rome empire history)
-Never loved you-mom
-Compulsive liar mom
-Mega giga annoying mom
-Inhumane parenting mom
-Mom attracting troubles (assassins, killers, loan sharks, gov, police)
-Mom causing you to go to wrong path (a medieval old story of a mom that kept praising her son despite him stealing bigger and bigger growing up, until he was executed)
-Mom that birthed the child only to get the money
-Mega stingy mom to the point of unhealthy
-Very sick mom that need attention (despite the child being normal, a certain % of "normies" would likely wish her death if her "daily care" isnt acceptable to them)
-Cannibalism mom
-Cannibalism mom that made you eat "meat" too (not knowing the truth)
-Cannibalism mom eating you
-Attention craving mom
-Fat mom (depend how much)
-Embarrassing mom (depend how much)
tldr :
A mom doing a (quantitively heavy) sin
that affect the child (or others)
That's straight-up cruel.Let him be born in Australia and registered as an Australian
Let him be born into Australia and registered as an Australian and same thing for Florida
For several particular beings & overlords, this is enough reason to chuck a knife to the mother's abdomen.
- Today's dinner wasn't chicken nuggies
Please just call the police on her, I can't read this anymore...-Abuse (physical or mentally)
-Betrayal
-Mistake huge enough, that could change destiny
-Unfairness (her divorcing dad, and prefering new relationship and denying old one)
-Scum, very scummy
-Bad reputation (onlyfans moms)(some twitter buzz like the ex-wife of the "(not)deadbeat dad" that put the dad in jail and everyone commenting she likely brainwashed her daughter to think the dad is evil, the "cake baking mom tiktok" that faked crying while baking cakes for children when in fact, she doesnt have custody [dad having 24/7 full custody which is a mega low probability to happen, unless mom very scummy], had scam history, faked cancer to get donations, had jail time)
-Retarded mom (and causing troubles)
-Feminist mom
-Woke mom
-Woke mom that destroy the favorite IPs of the world
-Forcing gender on child, mom
-Dictator mom (both meaning of "control" in parenting and real politician dictator)
-Mom having causing troubles to humanity
-Cult leader mom
-Rapist mom
-Violent mom that beat dad
-Mom that jailed the dad unfairly
-Mom that unfairly took custody of the child-you, when you dislike her, and prefer the dad
-Pedo mom
-Nymphomaniac mom
-Cheating with others, mom, betraying dad
-Killer mom
-Twitter addict mom with brainrot
-Kidnapper mom, that stole you, the child, from real parents
-Loan (gambler) mom, that always beg the child of money
-Junky drug mom
-Cockblocking/relationship destroyer mom
-Mom taking you-the-child hostrage with gun
-Mom abandonning child at birth (with bad reasons) (with good reasons moms too if they had alternatives)
-World destroyer mom
-Mom giving birth to you while having STDs
-Incest mom
-Mom forcing you to give your organs to the prefered child (happens sometimes as the beginning of some chinese novels)
-Organ seller mom
-Child trafficker mom
-Polluting mom (some stars using private jet EVERYDAY, rivaling the environment destruction of Rome empire history)
-Never loved you-mom
-Compulsive liar mom
-Mega giga annoying mom
-Inhumane parenting mom
-Mom attracting troubles (assassins, killers, loan sharks, gov, police)
-Mom causing you to go to wrong path (a medieval old story of a mom that kept praising her son despite him stealing bigger and bigger growing up, until he was executed)
-Mom that birthed the child only to get the money
-Mega stingy mom to the point of unhealthy
-Very sick mom that need attention (despite the child being normal, a certain % of "normies" would likely wish her death if her "daily care" isnt acceptable to them)
-Cannibalism mom
-Cannibalism mom that made you eat "meat" too (not knowing the truth)
-Cannibalism mom eating you
-Attention craving mom
-Fat mom (depend how much)
-Embarrassing mom (depend how much)
tldr :
A mom doing a (quantitively heavy) sin
that affect the child (or others)
It's even better to just think about the mental health of the readersAnd think, not about what you the author want to happen, but about what would your character do in this situation.
It's his story, man. You don't critique the main plot (even if it's Gorey or messed up AF) unless there's plotholes...The fuck? You for real, dude?
Don't you think it's a little too extreme and superficial?
I mean, it's his mother and all, so instead of humiliating and torturing her, don't you think a quick death would be better?
Also, selling her soul for a wish?
I don't want to sound mean, but dude, you should chill down and calmly think for a moment.
Some people are just not worth a redemption, and some scars are better left buried within. So chill down, dude... And think, not about what you the author want to happen, but about what would your character do in this situation.
It's his story, man. You don't critique the main plot (even if it's Gorey or messed up AF) unless there's plotholes