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SkaraVaden

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Hi! I would love some feedback on my story, if you feel like it :D I want honesty, because I fear I could have a bias about the story haha
 

Cookiez_N_Potionz

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Dump your links here and I’ll give you a wonderful bs review! (With sincerity! Straight from the heart!:blob_cookie:)

(I’m an inexperienced, unprofessional author/reader so take my words lightly. I’m doing this for fun because I’m bored. Feel free to disagree with my opinions, I just want to see how people write their stories)

I have no requirements. I read everything and anything (but I’m more familiar with BL lol)

And you can roast mine: Dotage and Discretion

I revamped my supernatural LitRPG story and and wrote a better synopsis

 

MsChange

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Dump your links here and I’ll give you a wonderful bs review! (With sincerity! Straight from the heart!:blob_cookie:)

(I’m an inexperienced, unprofessional author/reader so take my words lightly. I’m doing this for fun because I’m bored. Feel free to disagree with my opinions, I just want to see how people write their stories)

I have no requirements. I read everything and anything (but I’m more familiar with BL lol)

And you can roast mine: Dotage and Discretion
Stained
Tell me something other than “your enter button hates you” ?
 

ZannaYO

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Jun 25, 2025
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Hi, not sure if you are still doing this, but if so, would you give my story a read?

It's a historical fantasy harem story, but very slow burn. The first and second chapters are written a little differently because I was still establishing the tone. I know R-18 content does well here but I'm not super comfortable writing it, so I just hope the story and characters carry it enough instead.

Edit: I also drew the title art myself!

 
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