Story commenting,no judging

[RomancingWanderer]

Post link of your story here.
I Will give you a feedback.
It would be good if the story is complete.
Let us say it is already book worthy.like 200 something page,or less of it is light novel.

I Will not steal your idea,or your works.
For exchange,perhaps,give feedback on story i wriite.

 

[Bimbanana]

How to make red flag request:

1. Asking for completed story or 200 pages worth
2. Saying it will not be stolen

 

[eagle_360]

I Will not steal your idea,or your works.

Post link of your story here.

Give link.

 

[Conqueror_Quack]

Give link.

Whistling wind

Adventure of boy nickname slow as cow,as a village biggest loser,caravan guard,pest controller and later Policy advisor of empire

www.scribblehub.com

 

[Bimbanana]

Whistling wind

Adventure of boy nickname slow as cow,as a village biggest loser,caravan guard,pest controller and later Policy advisor of empire

www.scribblehub.com

Is that @JayMark biography?

 

[TinaMigarlo]

How to make red flag request:

1. Asking for completed story or 200 pages worth
2. Saying it will not be stolen

ask them what language translation I should helpfully provide.
or hey, you want something for a certain demographic?
just tell me. I'll write you 200 pages of *degeneracy* for any market you want.

"Beneath the Burka" - the uplifting tale of a brave girl who dared to show her face in public. She only sells views of her face to rich strangers, to save up enough money to reverse the cliterectomy. Her dream is to one day sell feet pictures on only fans. A heartwarming story of epic courage that the whole family can enjoy.

I mean, for all I know? I could be a major hit in Pakistan, how the *&^% would I know.
we're talking film rights "bidding war" in Bali-wood? That alone could be, what, like 100 or 200 dollars right there.

 

[Bimbanana]

Whistling wind

Adventure of boy nickname slow as cow,as a village biggest loser,caravan guard,pest controller and later Policy advisor of empire

www.scribblehub.com

I take a read and reeeeally suspect its a translation

How do i report it? Will this be my first catch? i'm so excited
Oh never mind, found it

 

[RomancingWanderer]

I take a read and reeeeally suspect its a translation

How do i report it? Will this be my first catch? i'm so excited
Oh never mind, found it

ask them what language translation I should helpfully provide.
or hey, you want something for a certain demographic?
just tell me. I'll write you 200 pages of *degeneracy* for any market you want.

"Beneath the Burka" - the uplifting tale of a brave girl who dared to show her face in public. She only sells views of her face to rich strangers, to save up enough money to reverse the cliterectomy. Her dream is to one day sell feet pictures on only fans. A heartwarming story of epic courage that the whole family can enjoy.

I mean, for all I know? I could be a major hit in Pakistan, how the *&^% would I know.
we're talking film rights "bidding war" in Bali-wood? That alone could be, what, like 100 or 200 dollars right there.

How to make red flag request:

1. Asking for completed story or 200 pages worth
2. Saying it will not be stolen

Is that @JayMark biography?

Who is that good gentlement?

ask them what language translation I should helpfully provide.
or hey, you want something for a certain demographic?
just tell me. I'll write you 200 pages of *degeneracy* for any market you want.

"Beneath the Burka" - the uplifting tale of a brave girl who dared to show her face in public. She only sells views of her face to rich strangers, to save up enough money to reverse the cliterectomy. Her dream is to one day sell feet pictures on only fans. A heartwarming story of epic courage that the whole family can enjoy.

I mean, for all I know? I could be a major hit in Pakistan, how the *&^% would I know.
we're talking film rights "bidding war" in Bali-wood? That alone could be, what, like 100 or 200 dollars right there.

ask them what language translation I should helpfully provide.
or hey, you want something for a certain demographic?
just tell me. I'll write you 200 pages of *degeneracy* for any market you want.

"Beneath the Burka" - the uplifting tale of a brave girl who dared to show her face in public. She only sells views of her face to rich strangers, to save up enough money to reverse the cliterectomy. Her dream is to one day sell feet pictures on only fans. A heartwarming story of epic courage that the whole family can enjoy.

I mean, for all I know? I could be a major hit in Pakistan, how the *&^% would I know.
we're talking film rights "bidding war" in Bali-wood? That alone could be, what, like 100 or 200 dollars right there.

Saudi arabia is the best,and Afghanistan

Is that @JayMark biography?

Give feed back then

 

[Nevafrost]

I could be a major hit in Pakistan,

The stereotype is killing me.