Review swarp please

[Zenomew]

No I did not use Ai I just tried to be formal in pointing out ideas....now that you mentioned it ,it kinda looks like Ai
Maybe I will just stick with paragraphs lot less Ai-ish

Thanks a lot, that really helps, and don't worry your are most definitely not offending, you are being helpful and I am very happy you take the time to read through it.

Here is mine https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1096211/the-reincarnated-archmage-needs-to-learn-magic-circles/

 

[MasFaqih]

I SWEAR TO GOD

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THEN WHAT IS THIS

You use AI to correct his/her problems?

P A T H E T I C

Oh my GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO-

Y-You know what? Please list characters you've introduced in your novel to the glossary. That's useful, in case you forgot chars in your story like this one.

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Yes, I forgor that you added new chaps recently

DAS THE SAME LINK YOU GAVE ME

Well thank you.

Even if you don't say so, I witnessed the chaos with my very eyes.

Alr, updated. Check the draft again.

I plan to have a chap telling his experience throughout the days, the 5 days.

Also, if you don't know already, this is a fanfic of a psychological horror game with the same title.

Das also includes you.

Chill bro,chill,You are too brutal.

 

[Zenomew]

I read your story I Want A Harem But Not This Kind,and posted a review about it
Please check out my story too

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1096211/the-reincarnated-archmage-needs-to-learn-magic-circles/

 

[Nolff]

Chill bro,chill,You are too brutal.

Look, I'm at least being honest with my review.

Take it with a grain of salt.

No I did not use Ai I just tried to be formal in pointing out ideas....now that you mentioned it ,it kinda looks like Ai
Maybe I will just stick with paragraphs lot less Ai-ish

Here is mine https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1096211/the-reincarnated-archmage-needs-to-learn-magic-circles/

No no, what makes me think you're using AI is the fact that the paragraphs were neat and clean but some of the lines are... Bothering me.

Like, look at this:

I don't mean to offend you,It is a great story

And this!

I am still reading

 

[Boundless]

Sure, I'll read the first 5 chapters, in exchange review mine too:

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/474537/the-powershifting-ability-is-convenient-even-in-another-world/

I will reply here after i've read the 5 chapters

 

[Boundless]

Sure, I'll read the first 5 chapters, in exchange review mine too:

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/474537/the-powershifting-ability-is-convenient-even-in-another-world/

I will reply here after i've read the 5 chapters

i'm done. thanks for your review!

 

[Zenomew]

i'm done. thanks for your review!

What your review on mine

 

[Boundless]

What your review on mine

check your reviews, i already dropped mine

 

[Zenomew]

Thank you