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[Deleted member 54065]

Uniqueness 1/5 - I don't see much in her that is vastly different or defining.

Design 4/5 - Could use bigger boobs.

Overall 3.5/5 - I'm sorry but my ratings don't really mean much unless I read the story. I've realized that short descriptions like this are meaningless. To be honest, nothing about her sounds all that unique from a wannabe main protagonist, thus there is a low unique rating. The design could be 5/5 considering you've gone a lot into background and also put up a detailed back story.

Also I realize "uniqueness" is not a required trait for a good story. It's only to make a character more memorable.

Anyway, I've realized that this is not a good way to rate anything. Summaries are not great with details.


It was.

You might not have to, this is after all just a flawed opinion based on limited information. I would also suggest perhaps a unique item or accessory too.

Well, true. Besides, I'm more on the story and how the characters interact with the events, than on the detailed descriptions.

Thanks for the insight though.

 

[AnonUnlimited]

You forget, Ai-chan is a programmer, and she was looking for an exploit in the rating system.

 

[Deleted member 113259]

Scott's new catchphrases:
You never stood a chance against the great Scott Flores!
Ants should stay as close to the ground as possible.
@Anon2023 New uniqueness rating, please?

 

[AnonUnlimited]

Scott's new catchphrases:
You never stood a chance against the great Scott Flores!
Ants should stay as close to the ground as possible.
@Anon2023 New uniqueness rating, please?

Those are lame catchphrases.
They also aren't unique.
-1 on the rating.

 

[greyblob]

thhoughts?

 

[Deleted member 113259]

Those are lame catchphrases.
They also aren't unique.
-1 on the rating.

Well, those weren't the real catchphrases anyway. Guess I'll keep the former rating smh.
@Anon2023 What is your idea of a good catchphrase? Nothing to do with the rating, I'm genuinely curious.

 

[Ai-chan]

You forget, Ai-chan is a programmer, and she was looking for an exploit in the rating system.

That Ai-chan did. Ai-chan is the Ai that programmes AIs. Aiaiaiaiai!

 

[AnonUnlimited]

Well, those weren't the real catchphrases anyway. Guess I'll keep the former rating smh.

It doesn't have to be catchphrase, but if it is then there are rules to it.
When you're trying to make a memorable catchphrase you have to think about what the character is doing a lot. For instance, if he's ruining someone's life, then every time he could say something to it like "just a little closer to the ground today."

It's got to be a phrase that is subtle and memorable.
A good example is Mordin from Mass Effect: "Had to be me, someone else could have gotten it wrong."

One of the Hitman reborn manga had a character that always said "I'll bite you to death" and that made him memorable along with his personality.

It has to
1) suit the personality
2) be subtle and unique
3) be a part of the character's behavior and actions.

thhoughts?

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Not your character.

 

[Deleted member 113259]

It doesn't have to be catchphrase, but if it is then there are rules to it.
When you're trying to make a memorable catchphrase you have to think about what the character is doing a lot. For instance, if he's ruining someone's life, then every time he could say something to it like "just a little closer to the ground today."

It's got to be a phrase that is subtle and memorable.
A good example is Mordin from Mass Effect: "Had to be me, someone else could have gotten it wrong."

One of the Hitman reborn manga had a character that always said "I'll bite you to death" and that made him memorable along with his personality.

It has to
1) suit the personality
2) be subtle and unique
3) be a part of the character's behavior and actions.

In that case:

When his rival is doing poorly: So the ant's gotten smaller.
When his rival is doing well: How are you still kicking?

When he's passed caring: It's the same repetitive script when will it end?

 

[Ai-chan]

Well, those weren't the real catchphrases anyway. Guess I'll keep the former rating smh.
@Anon2023 What is your idea of a good catchphrase? Nothing to do with the rating, I'm genuinely curious.

1. I don't just walk the walk, I strut the strut!
2. Money talks and I'm its favourite conversation!
3. Envy me, darling, it's the sincerest form of flattery
4. Wrath unleashed! Well, maybe after my nap.
5. Why work hard when you can hardly work?
6. Greed is my middle name, and I've got the receipts to prove it.
7. Oh please, jealousy is just my way of reminding you how inferior you are.
8. They say patience is a virtue, but who has time for virtues? I'm too busy lazying around.
9. I'm a shining star in a world of mere mortals. Admire and weep!
10. Life's too short to do anything other than bask in my own fabulousness!

 

[AnonUnlimited]

In that case:

When his rival is doing poorly: So the ant's gotten smaller.
When his rival is doing well: How are you still kicking?

When he's passed caring: It's the same repetitive script when will it end?

It's a good start. I guess if he says it over and over it'll become memorable. Since it's not a comic you can't make a memorable face lol.