Need feedback on "spicy" scenes

CountVanBadger

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I just wrote some spicy chapters for XNPC. This my first time ever writing anything like that. I want them to be, you know, exciting without being outright smutty. Would anyone be interested in beta reading them to tell me if I did all right? It's three chapters, equaling a little less than 9000 words total. Let me know and I'll message you the Google Docs link.
 
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