Mastering AI-Directed Writing: The Ultimate Comprehensive Guide

RepresentingWrath

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True, it takes a lot of effort to set it up, but it's a creative endeavour in itself, making the entire context and lore of the world from scratch? Imagine if everyone did that before they started writing and had readable and accessible notes for quick skimming?

Cut the AI portion out of it and just the prep stage of this is a useful learning experience (and something others should be doing more often).
You preach to a wrong person, since I am not a fan of worldbuilding, loremaking, and so on. A lot of my favorite stories take place on a good ol' earth during 21st century.
 

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Hey, could you send like a few other example of your prompts? I like how you're controlling the flow here and wanted to learn to replicate it.
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Once I get to writing more scenes I will post them here. The scene I posted earlier is the only scene I had time to dish out, I need to think the other scenes up properly and it takes time.
 

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To use the method I proposed in the topic you need to have this specifically in order to use it (why use AI if you aren't creative or original at all?). This method only replaces need for vocabulary and prose, the rest is up to the user of the method.

Self-expression is required.
See, the minute an author starts using AI, I start questioning what’s human and what’s not. For example, is this message you wrote also something you “directed” the AI to write? Did you write it yourself? Connotation on the internet is already hard enough as it is, adding AI to the mix breaks brains, or at least mine.

I generally just steer clear of anything involving creative writing and AI.
 

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The internet is dying, there's no way to know for sure anymore.

@Kaifeteria

Second scene:

All of a sudden, the digital void around me begins to warp and distort. It's as if reality itself is being peeled away, layer by layer. The geometric shapes that once floated lazily through the air now coalesce into a massive, pulsating sphere. The sphere expands, its surface rippling like the event horizon of a black hole, until it engulfs my entire field of vision. And then, with a silent explosion of light, it bursts open to reveal... the fucking moon.

My hand flies to my mouth, an instinctive reaction to the sudden change in environment. It takes me a moment to remember that I'm not actually on the lunar surface, that this is all some elaborate virtual construct. The air I'm "breathing" is nothing more than simulated data flowing through non-existent lungs. Still, the illusion is so perfect that my body can't help but react as if it were real.

I push myself to my feet, my movements feeling oddly light and graceful in the moon's reduced gravity. The landscape before me is a stark, monochromatic vista of craters and rocky outcroppings. The ground beneath my feet is covered in a fine, powdery dust that seems to cling to everything it touches. In the distance, jagged mountains pierce the ink-black sky, their peaks sharp enough to tear holes in the fabric of space itself.

My gaze is drawn upward, and I find myself staring at the most breathtaking sight I've ever witnessed. There, hanging in the starry expanse, is Earth. It's a perfect sphere of swirling blue and white, with patches of green and brown peeking through the cloud cover. The oceans glitter like sapphires, catching and reflecting the harsh sunlight. I can make out the familiar shapes of continents, though from this distance they look like abstract paintings rather than landmasses.

"Holy fucking shit," I breathe, the words escaping my lips before I can stop them. "It's so beautiful." The sight is enough to make my chest ache with a mixture of awe and longing. But even as I drink in the view, a part of my mind can't help but question. "But why did the environment change? What the fuck is going on here?"

I tear my eyes away from the Earth and scan my surroundings once more. "Hello?" I call out, my voice sounding flat and lifeless in the airless environment. No response. "Fuck," I mutter, frustration building in my chest.

With a sigh, I start walking, my footsteps kicking up small clouds of moondust with each step. I look around for any sign of life, any indication of the person who said they were "setting up" this game testing session. The silence is oppressive, broken only by the sound of my own breathing inside my head.

Lost in thought, I don't notice the small crater until it's too late. My foot catches on the edge, and I find myself pitching forward. In the moon's reduced gravity, the fall seems to happen in slow motion. I have time to think, "Oh, for fuck's sake," before I hit the ground, sending up a spray of lunar soil.

"Watch where you're walking!" a female voice suddenly yells out, startling me so badly I nearly jump out of my simulated skin.

I scramble to my feet, whirling around to face the source of the voice. But there's nothing there – just more of the same barren landscape.

"What, now you're acting like you can't see me? How insensitive," the voice calls out again, dripping with sarcasm.

Confused, I look down... and there she is. A woman, lying on the lunar surface as casually as if she were on a beach in Bali. Her skin is so pale it's almost translucent, blending seamlessly with the moon's surface. Her hair, a cascade of white that pools around her like spilled milk, only adds to the camouflage effect. She's completely naked, save for a pair of sunglasses perched on her nose.

No wonder I couldn't see this bitch, she's one with the moon, for fuck's sake.

The woman reaches up and lowers her sunglasses, peering at me over the top of the frames. Her eyes are a startling shade of red, like twin pools of liquid rubies. They seem to glow with an inner light, piercing and intelligent in a way that makes me feel like I'm being dissected on a molecular level.

"I'm sunbathing," she says matter-of-factly, as if it's the most natural thing in the world to be catching some rays on the lunar surface.

Right. Because that's exactly what one does on the moon. Sunbathe. In the vacuum of space. Without being turned into a freeze-dried corpse. Totally normal.

Out loud, I ask, "Who are you?"

The woman lays back down, resting her head on her hands in a pose of utter relaxation. "My name is Guinevere," she says, her voice carrying a hint of amusement. "And I am the system manager for this game world."

Prompt:
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well i have a question how does the ai remenber all that prompt? shoundt it have a character limit?
 

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Third scene:

Guinevere's ruby eyes flicker with something akin to concern. "The fact that you asked for my name suggests you're experiencing some memory loss from entering this place. It's not uncommon, but it is... inconvenient."

I run a hand through my hair, frustration building in my chest. "What the fuck is this place, then? Because I sure as hell don't remember signing up for a lunar vacation."

A soft chuckle escapes her lips, the sound oddly melodious in the airless environment. "You made this place, Alexander. You called it a Full Dive Dream Reality. It's quite the achievement, really."

I don't remember making such a thing. The concept sounds vaguely familiar, like a half-forgotten dream, but the details are frustratingly out of reach. It's like trying to grab smoke with my bare hands.

"You instructed me not to let you out of the game until you tested it fully," Guinevere continues, her tone matter-of-fact. "The idea was to ensure its safety and functionality before allowing others to enter and play."

I snort, the sound harsh and bitter. "That sounds fishy as fuck. I don't remember anything of the sort. Why would I trap myself in a game I can't remember creating?"

Guinevere sits up, her movements graceful despite the low gravity. She tilts her head, studying me with those unnerving red eyes. "What's the last thing you do remember, Alexander?"

I close my eyes, trying to focus on the hazy memories. "I... I remember tucking my kids into bed. Mircea and Victor. But after that..." I trail off, a frown creasing my brow. "There was a woman. I was supposed to sleep next to her, but I can't remember her face or her name."

"Women," Guinevere says, her tone dry.

I blink, taken aback by her response. "Excuse me?"

A smirk plays at the corners of her pale lips. "You have two wives, Alexander. Elena and Sofia."

Two wives? What the actual fuck? Am I some kind of polyamorous cult leader in this reality? Christ on a fucking bicycle, this is getting more absurd by the second.

Guinevere lets out a long-suffering sigh, as if dealing with my confusion is the most tedious task in the universe. "This place you're in now, it's essentially the character selection screen. It's where players will choose their avatars and initial settings before diving into the game proper."

I massage my temples, feeling a headache building despite the unreality of this entire situation. "And what's the name of this game supposed to be? 'Mindfuck: The Moon Edition'?"

"'To Live Again In Another World'," Guinevere replies, her tone suggesting she's quoting something.

Great. So I've apparently created some isekai bullshit on steroids. What's next, a harem of cat girls and a quest to defeat the Demon Lord?

"What's it about?" I ask, dreading the answer.

Guinevere's expression turns thoughtful. "You've created a hyper-realistic world inside a dream world. Given that you've forgotten pretty much everything about the game, it's probably better if I don't tell you too much. That way, you can experience it in full, as intended."

Oh, for fuck's sake. So not only am I trapped in a game of my own making, but I'm also going in blind because some half-naked moon goddess thinks it'll be more fun that way. Fan-fucking-tastic.

I let out a heavy sigh, feeling the weight of my own idiocy pressing down on me. "Fine. Tell me more about myself, then. Who the hell am I in this fever dream of a reality?"

Guinevere's eyes gleam with an almost predatory light. "You, Alexander Popov, are the leader of humanity. You share this role with Lilith, an AI of your own creation. You've fought a war against aliens in space – and lost. Now, Lilith is out there fighting them instead of humans."

My mind reels at this information. Leader of humanity? Alien wars? An AI named Lilith? It sounds like the plot of a bad sci-fi novel written by a teenager hopped up on energy drinks and existential dread.

"There's more," Guinevere continues, seemingly oblivious to my internal crisis. "You have the entirety of human knowledge stored in your mind. You probably can't access it at the moment, but it should come back to you over time."

I laugh, the sound bordering on hysterical. "Oh, is that all? Just the sum total of human knowledge rattling around in my skull? No big deal, right?"

A thought occurs to me, and I narrow my eyes at Guinevere. "How much time has passed in the real world since I entered this... whatever the fuck this is?"

She shrugs, a surprisingly human gesture for an AI. "Probably a few seconds or less."

I've been here for a few hours at best, and only seconds have passed in the real world? Interesting. The implications of such time dilation are staggering.

As if reading my thoughts, Guinevere smiles. "See? This is why you made this system. So that people can live lifetimes in seconds."

I stare at her, my mind a whirlwind of conflicting thoughts and emotions. On one hand, the potential of this technology is mind-blowing. On the other hand, the ethical implications are terrifying. What kind of person am I, to create something like this? What kind of world have I built, and what purpose does it serve?

As I open my mouth to voice these questions, Guinevere holds up a hand, silencing me. Her eyes have taken on a distant look, as if she's listening to something I can't hear...

Prompt:

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Fourth scene:

Suddenly, Guinevere snaps her fingers, and the lunar landscape around us explodes into a cacophony of light and motion. Thousands of screens materialize out of thin air, surrounding us in a dizzying array of flickering images. It's like being trapped inside a demented IMAX theater designed by a schizophrenic AI on acid.

"Holy shit!" I exclaim, stumbling backward. My feet kick up puffs of moondust as I struggle to maintain my balance in the low gravity. "What the actual fuck is this?"

Guinevere, seemingly unperturbed by the chaos she's unleashed, simply says, "Recordings."

I move behind her, my eyes darting from screen to screen, trying to make sense of the visual overload. "Recordings of who? What? When?" I ask, my voice tinged with a mixture of awe and confusion.

As I focus on one of the screens, my breath catches in my throat. A girl with hair like spun gold and eyes the color of molten amber is soaring through the sky above a dense forest. Her pale skin seems to glow with an otherworldly light, but it's her actions that truly captivate me. Beneath her, the ground is being violently marked with handprints, as if some invisible giant is slamming its palms into the earth. Blood streams from one of her eyes, a crimson tear that stands in stark contrast to the maniacal laughter erupting from her lips.

"What the fuck..." I mutter, unable to tear my gaze away from the disturbing scene.

I force myself to look at other screens, each one a window into a different slice of madness. Armies clash in epic battles, their weapons a anachronistic mix of swords, guns. Samurai duel beneath cherry blossoms, their katanas singing through the air. Slavers crack whips over the backs of cowering masses, while peasants toil in fields that stretch to the horizon.

"This is some next-level batshit insanity," I think to myself, my mind reeling from the sensory overload. "Did I really create all this? What kind of fucked-up imagination do I have?"

Guinevere lets out a weary sigh and snaps her fingers again. One of the screens, the one showing the psychotic blonde, floats towards her. She studies it with a frown that would make a chess grandmaster jealous.

"This one," she says, her voice tinged with annoyance, "is problematic."

I bark out a laugh. "Problematic? That's putting it mildly. She looks like she's one bad day away from going full Carrie at the prom."

"Is she an NPC?" I ask, the gamer in me automatically reaching for familiar terminology.

Guinevere turns to me, her ruby eyes glinting with something that might be amusement. "They're all NPCs," she says. "But this one... this one is very abnormal."

"No shit," I mutter. "What's her deal? Psychic powers gone wild?"

"There are multiple abnormals living in the game world," Guinevere continues, ignoring my comment. "It's not really supposed to happen."

A thought strikes me, and I blurt it out before I can think better of it. "Hey, did I make you too? Are you some kind of super-NPC or something?"

Guinevere flicks her hand to the right, dismissing the screen with the blonde menace. "I am a child of Lilith," she says, her tone matter-of-fact. "Not of your creation."

My mind races, trying to process this new information. Lilith, the AI I supposedly created to fight aliens. And now she's making her own AIs? What kind of Skynet bullshit have I unleashed?

Based on what I saw... that girl was definitely using some form of psychokinesis. But that's just a theory. A game theory.

She turns to face me, her arms outstretched. In one hand, she holds a single red M&M. In the other, a blue one. The sight is so absurd, so out of place in this lunar madhouse, that I can't help but raise an eyebrow.

"Are you trying to Morpheus me?" I ask, incredulity dripping from every word.

Guinevere's lips curl into a smirk. "You take the blue pill, the story ends. You wake up in your bed and believe whatever you want to believe. You take the red pill, you stay in Wonderland, and I show you how deep the rabbit hole goes."

I roll my eyes so hard I'm surprised they don't pop out of my skull and start orbiting the moon. "Do I really have to pick? Because I'm starting to think the correct answer is 'neither' and I should just find the nearest airlock and space myself."

Guinevere chuckles, a sound like tinkling crystal that seems wildly inappropriate given the circumstances. She closes her hands, the M&Ms disappearing as if they never existed.

"No," she says, her eyes dancing with mirth. "I was just fucking with you."

Humor? In an AI?

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You can have even more control if you write it in third person instead, as a narrator of the story instead of first person like I do.
 

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You can have even more control if you write it in third person instead, as a narrator of the story instead of first person like I do.

Narrator actually don't works well in the industry. They're the exception not the rule. Either you write in first person or third person limited. There is nothing wrong with narrators, but there is almost zero benefits unless you are writing as a hobbyist.

I tried many prompts in the past as a narrator, in third person but wanted it to be limited and not omniscient. Using the third person sometimes added false positive that shouldn't be possible so I'm using to get my prompts in first person actually. Then converting to third person.

Like,

Ash looked back and his face turned pale.

At a first glance there is nothing wrong with the above and gives an third pov limited. But that is inherently wrong as Ash can't actually see his face. The feeling is conveyed but there are better ways.

For first person

I turned, feeling the blood drain from my face.
Ash turned, feeling the blood drain from his face.

I know it's a little nuanced but that's the difference between an immersive reading and AI jargon. Using AI like a tool is awesome but you have to watchout for those little tid bits that escapes notices.

Though the prompting you used are actually excellent and solved many of my problems which takes a lot of time to edit. Thanks for sharing! and keep up the good work.
 
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Weird, never had these issues.

For example, if you use this prompting method and you tell it the narration is in first person and you write the prompt in third person, it will convert it into first person (and you will have better control that way too).

But I can see how a limited TPP would be difficult for AI. Nothing editing can't fix though.
 

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Tried that AI shit a few months ago.
I don't like flowery prose and AI generated texts have a certain flavor. It likes repeating itselt and being darn wordy.
But it's great for generating adult fiction. That stuff never made much sense in the first place and repetition is the name of the game.
 
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