I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it

[harrydouthwaite]

Here is my story. Looking forward to hearing back from you.

Sixes and Sevens

A Trains On The Brain series story. When you're all at sixes and sevens, you feel overwhelmed and unable to cope. That's how twelve-year old Robin feels a lot of the time, but as he enters his preteen years in 2006 his world begins to change in many ways which leads...

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[Lorelliad]

Rynth

Everything is cyclical. It is the unshakable rhythm of the universe. Rynth is the product of those who came before—souls who rose from nothing and toiled for centuries to bring the world to the Twelfth Cycle: Synthesis. Here, magic, technology, and knowledge from every past age converge, and the...

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Tony hasn't approved it yet, but it should show up. Tried it in incognito.

I was in a big slump for a while, and couldn't stick to a single story for more than a few chapters. It was about December of last year that I really started sticking to this. It's been working out for a while, and I haven't lost interest.

 

[TheGreatOne6000]

This is mine.

A Promise from Me to You

Talent and change, those two define humanity. Yet, Elliot had neither. As a freshman at Laxus Flare Academy, Elliot Elanderin is surrounded by brilliance and exellence you couldn't find anywhere else. Compared to them, or anyone really, Elliot is pathetically ordinary—someone without a defining...

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Inspired by A silent voice, Re zero, and slightly Classroom of the Elite. SInce it's not a fantasy but a slice of life, it was more inspired by Re zero's thematic depth and character writing.

 

[treze]

Would love some feedback on my Story.

All feedback is appreciated.

Dream Dungeon – Earth’s Induction Trial LitRPG

Seventeen-year-old Mike Valencia only feels free when he’s asleep. Until now. Every night, at exactly 10:00pm, a faceless System drags him into the Dream Dungeon — a deadly evaluation designed to determine whether Earth deserves induction into the multiverse. Each floor is a test. Each fight...

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[LiangQingge122]

Looking forward to your opinion.

The World Is A Harmony

To reach the other world, he had to die. Not permanently, just long enough to pass through. Each method only worked once. Each return left him transformed. He was Held, a warrior. But he was also Haruto, a student. Somewhere between suicide and survival, Haruto was learning that the difference...

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[MC-Stories]

Beast Heroes: Roxy’s Rebirth!

Do you believe in Seccond Chances, if not, neither did I, that is until my girlfriend killed me just to survive, I realized that the love we had wasn't love at all, but as soon as I realized my fate, I was sent back in time to the day me...

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I took your advice and fixed the writing Format with this one I hope you like this one better!

 

[babywrath]

I love Isekai and Magus stories and I wanted something similar, something grand, something that can go for thousands of chapters and this is my take.

Great Journey: Whims of Fate