I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it

harrydouthwaite

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Here is my story. Looking forward to hearing back from you.

 

Lorelliad

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Tony hasn't approved it yet, but it should show up. Tried it in incognito.

I was in a big slump for a while, and couldn't stick to a single story for more than a few chapters. It was about December of last year that I really started sticking to this. It's been working out for a while, and I haven't lost interest.
 

TheGreatOne6000

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This is mine.


Inspired by A silent voice, Re zero, and slightly Classroom of the Elite. SInce it's not a fantasy but a slice of life, it was more inspired by Re zero's thematic depth and character writing.
 

treze

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Would love some feedback on my Story.

All feedback is appreciated.

 

LiangQingge122

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Looking forward to your opinion.

 

MC-Stories

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I took your advice and fixed the writing Format with this one I hope you like this one better!
 
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