I just had a terrible idea!

[Representing_Tromba]

This a perfect idea! It will probably meet the fast pace all the TikTok internet tweakers want you to go at.

You know the ones that complain your story is too slow even after you have already established it was going to be like that from the get go.

Yeah, it probably would. However, you would have to make every character interesting or at the very least, the plot that they're centered around.

 

[T.K._Paradox]

Yeah, it probably would. However, you would have to make every character interesting or at the very least, the plot that they're centered around.

Pfft. Who needs things like character development, or stable plot structure! Hero's Journey? Never heard of her.

Have the story be nothing but hyper paced action. Use some pointless harem collecting and smut to cover up the fact your world has so many plot holes and so little depth in it starts to resemble swiss cheese, or an old anime body pillow.

 

[RepresentingCaution]

That's called omniscient narration

Not in 1st person.