When I get bored, I just write my idea down in the middle of the chapter so I can continue off it. Which ends up making these grammar balls of flame.
(Gets up and looks around, hears crackle behind him.)
(Near end all the shock to disabate, and his underlying self by separating the narrator, and making it less tinted. Show his stress and slow realization of his family being gone. Not in thoughts, but in actions. By violent outburst, and forcabily stopping himself. Grabbing his head, muscles tending, teeth gritting.)
(Gets up and looks around, hears crackle behind him.)
(Near end all the shock to disabate, and his underlying self by separating the narrator, and making it less tinted. Show his stress and slow realization of his family being gone. Not in thoughts, but in actions. By violent outburst, and forcabily stopping himself. Grabbing his head, muscles tending, teeth gritting.)