Could you give me a review?

[TheKillingAlice]

It's all the fault of this one guy here.

Nah, I'll make it your fault.

 

[whitesculptor]

I didn't read past chapter 1, however, it is easy to understand. I found some use of AI in the story, which is fine. You can do it that way and then edit it with your own style. If you don't have a style, return to it in the far fetched future.
As it is, no one will complain on grammar or clarity.
I hope that helped.

 

[LastMinami]

I didn't read past chapter 1, however, it is easy to understand. I found some use of AI in the story, which is fine. You can do it that way and then edit it with your own style. If you don't have a style, return to it in the far fetched future.
As it is, no one will complain on grammar or clarity.
I hope that helped.

I understand, and I appreciate it. Chapter 1 was the very first one I wrote, and it really wasn't originally conceived as a standalone novel—that only came into play around Chapters 2 and 3. Thank you for your time; it was merely a prologue to a vague idea that was later revisited.

 

[Nevafrost]

How tf did the convo go from a review to a feud over food?

 

[RepresentingAnti-Representings]

Reading this post comments while drunk has been the weirdest mind-blowing experience ever.