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Thank you. I needed that haha. Then, sad ending is my thing now :)

Currently, I am writing the ending of Volume 04. Almost all of the endings I wrote so far have been… sad. I don’t want to change the current one, but I’m worried it might seem like I only write that kind of ending, or that it might start to feel a bit cliché. What would you do if you were in my...

I reached volume 03, and now it's a giant mess of chapters. we need grouping.

lol I work hard. Don't read all of them lol. Prologue + ch 1. vs Prologue + ch 46

I want special feedback. Since I wrote three volumes, I want to see if I have ever improved. Two chapters from vol 1 and two from 3 to see if I evolved. I would appreciate any criticism. Thank you in advance.

depends

As many suggested, you can't judge a book by its first chapter. So I waited until this time to request some feedback. I'm currently halfway writing Vol. 2 so I need some steering. What do you think? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2044869/eunit-the-blue-angels-of-death/

No problem man, thanks for the feedback again. Notes taken. and just to clarify they are not Invincible. I don't want the superman effect on my story, it sucks and make the characters uninteresting.

Thank you so much for the honest review! you're right, i described them way too many times lol. I see that cruel girls is not your favorite thing to read but you're right, too much blood. i want to draw the image of elegant cruel girls but i over did it. thanks for the feedback man, i needed it.

Thank you! that's much better, i like 'Constructive' criticism. but he is lying. there was no view yet on my story, he didn't read it too. he just did read the blurb and moved on. I didn't wanna info dump on the FIRST chapter so, thanks for being a normal human being. that dude probably got no...

haha, way worse.

when someone try to promote his story, by hating yours online.

I think i fixed the problrm now https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2044869/eunit-the-blue-angels-of-death/

lol chill dude. lol chill dude.

This is second attempt. For some reason, the first post didn't allow me to post links lol. My whole link glitched. Here it is: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2044869/eunit-the-blue-angels-of-death/ This is a fast paced action story in modern/dystopian settings.

it got approved finally.

i sent it, it needs to be approved for some reason.

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2021298/eunit-code-red/

Name: E-UNIT: Code RED.