Interesting Story Feedback.

[oussama_schrodinger]

I want special feedback. Since I wrote three volumes, I want to see if I have ever improved. Two chapters from vol 1 and two from 3 to see if I evolved. I would appreciate any criticism. Thank you in advance.

 

[L1aei]

Fifty two chapters.

I'll add it only my reading list. I'll get back to you about your request.

 

[oussama_schrodinger]

lol I work hard. Don't read all of them lol. Prologue + ch 1. vs Prologue + ch 46