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Well, if you want MY perspective, not only is that too simple and barebones, but it sounds like you don't really need a system for that. Add some benefits related specifically to the system itself, like maybe you can combine the spells to create more powerful spells or something like that, I...

This is something I've thought about for a long time as I've read LOTM, Shadow Slave, Dragon Ball, Bleach, Choujin X, Jagaaan, Hunter x Hunter, and many more series and when I see comments beneath videos I watch, they always say a power system is good mainly because of its complexity, but....I...

Simple, dopamine. Dopamine can make people forget the hints you laid out. So, with actions, you put consistent hints instead do one vague, otherwise, most people won't remember because they think about all the other maybe hype stuff and fun action seem in your novel, forgetting that hint and...

What would that look like exactly? I've been using a lot of my love for Warhammer40k in my side novel, since it will be a steampunk dystopian world where they hail the Iron-Blood Empire and the Golden Emperor of Humanity from the 3rd Epoch, where they make soldiers from the day they are born to...

That depends on the book. For action ones, the foreshadowing shouldn't be dragged out too much For mystery, the foreshadowing can be much longer than normal since it can be referenced a lot depending on the mystery of course. Overall, it depends on the genre, at least that's what I think

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Well, in a way. The world is very harsh as the people of said world encourage violence and control as everyone in the world is trying to become the strongest to reach the infamous Supreme Magus rank through grimoires (Inspired by Reverend Insanity. There is a lot of Reverend Insanity...

Oh. Yeah, yeah, I'll definitely focus on the grooming aspect

Really? I mean I know Sunny was an orphan in the slums and there was a war, but it's not like he's being picked to be a soldier, they don't live in a steampunk city I believe, there aren't demi-humans, and the academy students frequently get dehumanized, which I'm pretty sure doesn't happen in...

So, in my side novel as I continue to build the world so that I can post it one day once I have everything set, I have this very dystopian like fantasy world with a mix of steampunk and Victorian. The country was war torn and because of that, city states were created to house to remnants of...

1. It doesn't exist to him 2. Whoever he wants to 3. Depends on if he can do it or not, his own ideals 4. When he gets a harem of at least 8 women

So, you didn't question why I used them as the standard? (YES, THEY'RE GOOD, YOU RETAR-, Yes, they ae good :biggrin_s: )

Lord of the Mysteries, Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint, Shadow Slave & Reverend Insanity

If I was a bot, I would have said LOTM, ORV, SS, and RI were peak. Which we know it isn't (It is thought)

Hey, I'm just telling you the facts. (Obviously I'm joking)

Yup, you heard that right, I am here to tell you how to make the BEST web novel ever, no tricks, no scams. I'm going to tell you how to make art for the novels AND how to write your novel. Trust me, this is the best advice ever. This will guarantee you in the top 10 in the leaderboards or...

I don't know what I'm looking at

No, it is possible. 100 Girlfriends is a good example of a harem done right

Oh, I won't. I physically can't really since I have such a desire to add personality to characters