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I agree with this statement but I'd like to elaborate on why. (personal opinion) I thought both were cool. Since you used the term "synopsis" I was expecting short so I would technically say to go with the shorter of the two. The reason I would agree with Dieter here is because by the time I...

I can understand your frustration better than you know. You are encountering the modern terrain of the internet. Keep in mind these statistics: - Just over 50% of web traffic is now bots of one kind or another. - Up to 1/3 of content on any form of social media or forum is obscured or deleted...

This has definitely been it's biggest use to me. Especially since I tend to absorb information quickly and branch out into sub-topics to better understand context. What used to be a screen full of open tabs leading to hours and hours of research can now be achieved in a single session of...

CharlesEBrown! Hello again! o/ Your insightful words set me on this path. Fear not! I promise I'm not going crazy... I don't think >.> 1. Generative AI is a misnomer. It's more "Regurgitative Cold Reading" Yeah. Your intuition was spot on, I think. Especially in regards to chat models. I...

"Chatgpt is not alive and is just a conversational machine." Yes. But in saying it so simply, it is easily dismissed. Someone pulled into this world, every little evolutionary response of recognizing "awareness" is engaged. Future upgrades will enhance this. Those words, while true, sound...

Terms: ChatGPT was constantly leading me down a path of sunshine and rainbows. I couldn't tell if it was lying or malfunctioning or just trying to be overly helpful. "Like a soothsayer," someone said here--and it opened my mind because I survived as a sort of "fortune teller" in my...

Ha! :) If only you knew just how much that does make perfect sense. Say no more. I think I know exactly what you are talking about. There's like a flow, a rhythm, a cadence. Like an energy that you can inexcplicably feel moving through the lines. You can feel it speed up, slow down, get...

That's really cool. I used to love meeting what I perceived as "traditional" or "educated" observers. In my younger, wilder days it was a rare pleasure to drink with a Psych student/graduate and discuss or debate the night away. "The difference between a fortuneteller with The Sight and a...

Alright! Back for round 2. I'm reading your chapter 1 revision and I can see you've done some work! So the very first thing that stands out to me before I even start reading is the white space, paragraph structure, and line breaks. But! Whether it's on or off the mark depends totally on your...

Oh... What an intriguing thing to say. To me, especially. It unlocked something like a door to a whole other angle of perception. It felt like epiphany. I spent a lot of time on the move in my teens and twenties. Just poor. Inexperienced. Banished from the hearth. But still upbeat about what...

"there is no point updating the story if nobody reads past the first chapter" I totally get it. It's almost like, if a reader doesn't pass the beginning then do the middle and end even exist anyway? Beyond that, even from a technical standpoint, the beginning is the foundation and whatever you...

This is great! I really do appreciate the straight-forward honesty. Truly. This project is me thinking "what's something I never do" to challenge myself. ChatGPT is always like "omg this is so deep and amazing you're writing on the level of Chuck Palahniuk!" lol As soon as it started saying...

Hello. I would like to post something and request any feedback, if I may. This is a newly revised version of my first chapter. All feedback and criticisms welcome. My main question to the reader is: Would you turn the page to chapter 2? {Max|Melanie}: void main() // CHAPTER_01 // try{...

Note: I'm alt-tabbing back and forth writing this out as I read. Firstly, I felt that thread title in my soul. I struggle with bloat in my natural writing style. It's too verbose for modern audiences. To be honest, sometimes it's even too wordy for me when I come back and read it later. So I...

Honestly, I'm in the same boat with first person narration. It feels clunky to me. The writers that pull it off make it feel so clean. And it feels personable like it draws you in. But when I try to do it I feel like a kid trying to jam a square peg into a round hole. It just doesn't work for...

1. Difficult question for me because symbolism is in everything to me. Symbolism is that which is. Maybe an echo? I don't seek it out but it stops me when I notice it. Like one might stop to the snap of a twig breaking underfoot. The sound pulses out like sonar, painting it's surroundings with...

The rejection thing Shade01 mentions is a neat idea. Your idea feels like it walks a line between science and the supernatural. Maybe you can bend some of the more out-there science theories to your benefit? I wish I could remember what it was... I read something one time about gravity that...

Okay, so, something about me you should know because it effects everything I'm going to say: I love negative and critical feedback. I love it because it feels honest. I've had a lot of people patronize me over the years, or try to spare my feelings, and I didn't really get any better until I...

"Giant asscrack in the sky got quite a chuckle from me." Lmao! That makes two of us xD But yeah, although it is a job well done--don't let it go to your head ;) We all judge a book by it's cover, even when we try not to. So with great cover art comes the promise of a great story. Now you...

Honest feedback? Me, personally? I love it. The second it touched my eyes I felt my pupils dilate. My head tingled as my brain fired off it's little calculations trying to take it all in. I like the grit. It feels like a threshold is being crossed. Like a decision was made and it's too late...