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  1. V8485

    Offering feedback on your first chapter

    Thanks
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    One Word Review

    I don't think this is going to get a word at all. The Devil’s Hell | Scribble Hub. If it does, thanks for spending your time on it.
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    I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it

    I did the genre thing on purpose, and also the Tokyo thing is explained later on, kind of. I've never been a fan of dialogue tags, but I look over to make sure it's understandable. Also grammatical mistakes are always my worst enemy, so thanks for bringing up that there's more I gotta find...
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    I'll read your first chapter and tell you my opinion on it

    I would be happy if you had a look at my novel book thing. The Devil’s Hell | Scribble Hub. What inspired me to write the tale was originally pure insanity. I was reading so many isekai webtoons/manhwa that I went mad because the main characters never act in the way I thought I would act. Also...
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    Offering feedback on your first chapter

    Chapter four is kind of a horror-feeling chapter, and The Devils Madness arc is kind of horror at points. Probably isn't the right book but hey may has well give it a shot. The Devil’s Hell | Scribble Hub
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    Low attention span reviews and ratings [Closed]

    Yeah, probably contact that person.
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    Low attention span reviews and ratings [Closed]

    Thanks man, and don't worry; it's not that heartbreaking. Scribble Hub is only one of the websites my tale is on; the main website I actually like is Royal Roads. But yeah, I'll delete the extra space and most likely add a "I said" and "Steve said." Thanks for using your time to give some advice...
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    Low attention span reviews and ratings [Closed]

    Damn, the size of the gaps between the diagonals on the Google Doc is much smaller. That's bloody annoying. Well, thanks for your time.
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    Low attention span reviews and ratings [Closed]

    I hope you enjoy. The Devil’s Hell | Scribble Hub. Have a good day.
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    I'll read a couple chapters of your story and give feedback best I can [No Submissions Temporarily (I need to catch up on everyone)]

    If you have the time, I would be grateful. The Devil’s Hell | Scribble Hub. Thanks
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    Story Time with the Meme Lady - A Feedback Thread (submit your stories!)

    Thanks, and if you ever see this comment again, and if it's possible when you're done with everyone else, could you take just a quick look over that first chapter just one more time? But thank you once more for your time and I hope you have a great day.
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    I'm SouthernMaiden, looking to give some Story Feedback while sick with the Flu [Now Closed]

    May as well, The Devil Been Isekai | Scribble Hub. Thanks for your time.
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    Hoshi's Feedback thread

    Well, I'm rather happy with most things and don't care to about readers on this website. I'll probably go back and look over the spacing eventually. Thanks for your opinion and time.
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    Hoshi's Feedback thread

    Every time I post on one of these, I never get anything back, but I may as well give it the old college try. The Devil Been Isekai | Scribble Hub, thanks if you get around to it.
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    What is the premise of your fiction in the form of a thesis question?

    How does a man get home with only a gun, knife and a flask?
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    Story Time with the Meme Lady - A Feedback Thread (submit your stories!)

    If you have the time, I would be thankful. Story: The Devil Been Isekai | Scribble Hub
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    As an author, how do you feel when writing villains who commit crimes or immoral acts?

    My main character has been shown to do more awful things than most of the villains, mostly because most villains were one-shot and he has the most screen time so far. But to actually answer the question, I fit somewhat bad when I started but I don't really now.
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    I'm tired of OP heros

    My main protagonist doesn't even have power, just a gun, a knife, and booze. Also he doesn't have a left eye and have a bum leg
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    What motivated you to stop being a reader and write your own fiction?

    I was reading a bunch of manwha isekai and watching a good sum as well. I went nuts after reading the same thing and watching the same things over and over again, so I finally broke. I opened Google Docs and typed up around a few hundred words and uploaded it to Wattpad and then Royal Roads...
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    Can We Fix Isekai? (Lost Zoro Story)

    This isn't a Zoro fanfic, but I've been trying to make a good isekai. But I hope you get a good fanfic.
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