I'm not sure if this is allowed, but I changed the book a bit from the last time I submitted, and if you are able to look over it once more, I would be thankful. But if not I totally get it and still thankful for the first time.
Novel link: The Devil Been Isekai | Scribble Hub
Thanks for any...
Don't take my word as gospel, but I use Royal Road, and it's very similar to ScribbleHub, at least in my view.
You still have the copyrights, in short.
This may sound foolish, but I always believe if you write what you want to see, then people will read it. Maybe not many but if it's just one person reading, and enjoying it, then I'm happy.
As I said, just a foolish man's belief.
Thank for the review of the first chapter.
I disagee on a few point but having any eyes and then seeing what I may had poorly is a great help.
I'm thinkful but I think V fits the story but I'm very thankful for spending any of your looking at my work.
I just hope for any feedback on my first chapter from my dark isekai.
The Devil Been Isekai - The Start of the Devils’ Escapades | Scribble Hub
Thank you if you decied to give any feedback.