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Thank ypu Thank you! I'm also a new author myself, so I have very little experience. I started around 1.5 to 2 yrs ago... my writing was also like this when I started Also çan you review my novel as well? My initial one had lot of puntual errors, and I did one grammarly pass and corrected...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/

Can yougive a feedback for mine too

I gave it a try, I'm a beginner as well so don't take everything I say for granted Notice how in these all the sentences starts with "He" it becomes boring really quickly, also fragmented sentences don't work everywhere, They are reserved for high stakes situations or sometimes for comedy Try...

Hi, everyone.... I fixed the punctuation errors on chapter 01 to 05 using Grammarly and tried my best to write long descriptions in chapter 07. Can anyone review at least Chapter 06 and 07 compared to initial chapters Thank you in advance...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/ Thank you in advance, If possible compare it to chapters 1,2,3 and give me feedback. I'm considering whether to delete the story and start again, Since I have to now re-edit each chapter...

Thank you! The thing I most struggle with descriptions is having a "flow" in it... Like what to describe in what order As I realized there are types of descroptions For example let's see the cave example Things to describe are as you said, Darkness, stillness and quiteness. I can identify...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/ Hi everyone! This is my first novel, many people pointed that earlier chapters lack description and detailing and was like a script of a play So I tried to change the style a bit, from...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/ Chapter 06 uploaded, tried my best to write on some descriptions, but the thing was dialogue heavy... so this was all what I could muster, I think it's better than last chapters. Just can...

Actually the problem was I was reading a lot of LNs recently and grown used to it :blob_sweat: I have read english novels mostly during childhood, but recently, all the novels I have read since then are LNs Now I kinda feel reading long paragraphs boring. Now If I go on writing with the flow...

Yeah the problem is that I assumed LN like style was a 'Style of writing' not a 'bad style of writing' I've reading lot of LNs recently and I like reading LNs that's probably why my style had gone like this I mean does those kind of sentences belong only in action scenes or high stakes scenes...

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As a new Author I struggle a lot with balancing these 2, I have written a novel in SH https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/ But I got 2-3 feedbacks saying too little detail and hard to follow. And my writing style tend to...

Sorry... only 4,300 words Sorry I'll post next week after writing 10k words

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/ Mine too please :blob_teary: Also I still couldn't find the way to edit individual chapters, I desperately need to edit ch01 and ch02, there are few puntual mistakes there. 5 chapters up!

Yeah, the problem is fixed from Ch 04 onwards I don't know how to edit previous chapters. Can you plz help me? Should I delete the story and start on again? How to edit single chapters Which are already published I've also published this on RR too, I fixed there, but here I can't find an...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/ I uploaded my novel, I got 3 readers and 2 favourites and around 50 views (idk but when I click chapters it shows only 7 views, I guess views doesnot equal read) in one day. is my story...

Thank you so much!!! :s_smile: Finally got a proper review Wait I used a different software to write ch04, not microsoft word Holy crap! There might be a issue after copying into the text editor here Thank you again for pointing out

Regarding prose... it's ok To give an feedback on a whole story I need more stuff. As time being the scene is good 3.3/5 - enjoyment But the problem is some areas it's not clear to me. Like was the prince being poisoned or something? Like in this bit Later he is chased by some sort of a...