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    Chapter 04 is up! Feedback please!

    Thank you, did you read until chapter 04, since I kind of messed up in the pre isekai part. Because I wrote them hastily to publish Did you think ch01 and ch02 are bad? Compared to second scene of chapter 03 and chapter 04 Fixed the fullstop (.) From chapter 04 Thank you so much again for...
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    Chapter 04 is up! Feedback please!

    What do you mean?
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    Chapter 04 is up! Feedback please!

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/ Thank you in advance :s_smile:
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    Need a story review

    I'm extremely sorry I copied the wrong link. It's there in SH too https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/
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    Need a story review

    Sorry😅 I'll fix it Thank you for pointing it out! Any other comments please!
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    Need a story review

    https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/163459/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters This is my story 3 chapters are up! 4th will follow soon Can anyone review my story upto now?
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    hello again, need feedback on my rewritten chapter!

    Thank you so much I think we both are different sides of the same coin I usually go with little description as possible :cry: Glad to hear your thoughts! Good luck to you as well? :s_smile: is there anything else with chapter 03 you found hard to follow, I re read it and realized in chapter...
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    hello again, need feedback on my rewritten chapter!

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/ Pretty much a parody series:s_smile:
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    hello again, need feedback on my rewritten chapter!

    I don't think prose quality has too much of a problem, it's readable for me. I think the 'injuries' take up more spot light than needed as we already get the idea that somehow the woman got injured from the start of the chapter. It's me being nitpicky, though Still chapter 01 is not...
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    New to platform and to writing

    Uploaded it 6 hours ago, Is it a manual process (The review) If So I get it, you can't confidently say a time frame I still can share the link in feedback forum, and they can read it.... Right?
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    New to platform and to writing

    I published my novel on this platform (First one) In my dashboard, it shows the novel but when I search for it in the search bar it never comes up, Is it because SH doesnot update on real time? Still my dashboard shows 0 views but 1 reader...
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    New to writing... Can anyone give their feedback on my first novel (An comedy Isekai)

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/ Reuploaded it, Still pre isekai part feels bit iffy
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    3 Chapters up! Can anyone review my story until now?

    Fixed the pre isekai part still feel bit iffy though https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2295105/i-refuse-to-level-up-dont-ask-about-my-sisters-opinion-on-this/
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    New to writing... Can anyone give their feedback on my first novel (An comedy Isekai)

    It's ok, the problem was from my side Thank you! I'm planning this to be a bit of a shorter story aiming for like 100 chapters, not more that that
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    New to writing... Can anyone give their feedback on my first novel (An comedy Isekai)

    Sorry... didn't mean to deny using AI for writing I meant to ask how to create a cover page, I just used AI image generator for cover image, I wanted to ask is there any other way? Sorry! I didn't mean to deny the fact that I used AI for writing, It was an error from my side in phrasing the...
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    New to writing... Can anyone give their feedback on my first novel (An comedy Isekai)

    Thank you :giggle: Uploaded a draft, mostly to check how the things going on :giggle: On the viewer tab I didn't see any views, Did you read it? @Bimbanana And I just used AI to create the cover image, Do you know any other way?
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    New to writing... Can anyone give their feedback on my first novel (An comedy Isekai)

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2293590/stuck-at-level--by-choice--dont-ask-my-sister-how-she-feels-about-it/ 4 chapters uploaded... 5th will follow soon Feel free to dessimate the story, Dismantle it, completely destroy or anything! Advices regarding how to improve the craft are highly...
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    New to writing... Please help (Regarding publishing and Marketing)

    Hi everyone, I'm a new Author, I have started writing not long ago (about 2 years back). I have a main novel I'm working on but I'm not confident enough yet to start publishing it :rolleyes:Since I feel the story is better and It still excites me to write Since I was scared to start publishing...
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    New to writing, Please help

    @DismaiNaim @SvalinnSaga Thank you!
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